Date: Apr 02, 2008 08:26 PM Title: Someday
Wow. Pretty nice. Of course, all of your stories are awesome! :)
P.S. Nickelback rocks! Use more of their songs!




Date: Feb 19, 2008 03:01 PM Title: Someday
A story whose messge you will nevr forgt. Thank you, we need more of these!
Date: Feb 03, 2008 02:20 PM Title: Fort Minor Yumi
Wow...while I've nevr herd that song, I love how you wrote this. I know I coldn't just shake off a commnt like that...





Date: Feb 02, 2008 09:49 PM Title: I Wont Say It
1 of my fave Disny songs ever! I abslty love it!





Date: Jan 31, 2008 01:16 AM Title: Be the Girl
please, finish, please





Date: Jan 28, 2008 11:00 AM Title: Chemicals React
I love it! The endng is so sweet, & I love the lyrics in Yumi's songs!





Date: Jan 28, 2008 06:56 AM Title: Unfaithful
did i like it?
i loved it, a great story, bear stuck in a swamp?! lol





Date: Jan 27, 2008 03:55 AM Title: Unfaithful Ulrich
that was cool, but you should have changed the ender reference,(he/she/) but it was good, in the end ulrich's 'sorry' solved the fight, well done





Date: Jan 27, 2008 02:08 AM Title: Someday
wow, that was good, but still it makes you think, well done, for making me think!





Date: Jan 27, 2008 01:45 AM Title: Fort Minor Yumi
wow, that was deep,well written, but sad





Date: Jan 27, 2008 01:22 AM Title: Take the Wheel
that was soooo sad, and great a song that came withit,





Date: Jan 27, 2008 12:27 AM Title: Keep holding on
wow, thats cool, but jeremie, evil no way, great songfic





Date: Jan 27, 2008 12:09 AM Title: Life Saver
wow, another ending with a slow song, aelita dj nd uxy
love it





Date: Jan 26, 2008 10:56 PM Title: I'm With You
awww, what a good, story, i love this song, go william





Date: Jan 26, 2008 10:41 PM Title: I Wont Say It
wow, do you write these songs your self, they're great,
Date: Jan 24, 2008 04:54 PM Title: Be the Girl
Oooooh! I love that song! Pretty good story too! :-)





Date: Jan 24, 2008 04:34 AM Title: Break down
what song was yumi singing
Author's Response: The song is "I miss you" by Hannah Montana





Date: Jan 23, 2008 05:29 AM Title: The Diary of a Mystery Girl
what a great story, and great songs awesome





Date: Jan 23, 2008 05:19 AM Title: Be the Girl
*claps,claps* a masterpiece, great song to, and you can really create an image in a persons mind