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Reviewer: Sithking Zero Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2009 11:57 PM Title: Inner Workings

Awwwww..... poor cody. He sorta-redeemed himself at the end, even if it was in vain.

Reviewer: Sithking Zero Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2009 11:44 PM Title: Construction Project

Hmmm.... good chapters, but they are a little short and could stand to be fleshed out more.

Reviewer: LyokoGirl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 29, 2006 11:26 AM Title: Construction Project

Interesting but you need to put space between your sentences that are in quotation marks. That will make things easier to read. Otherwise a great story!

Author's Response: Thanks! I was trying to put spaces when i made it but didn't have time.

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