[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2008 03:11 PM Title: Ulrich Stern
This is definitely your best work, in my opinion, so far. Somehow...it just fits: Ulrich's personality, his father's perfectionism, and all the other elements that make Ulrich up. Great job.
[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2008 02:42 AM Title: Jeremie Belpois
wow, it all fits, and has an awesome twist to it too! not like those other stories that just seem to be all perfect family, world, and other all the way through, and the fact that jeremie was adopted was an awesome idea!!!!
[Report This]Date: Feb 23, 2008 04:52 AM Title: Aelita Hopper
wow, it has heaps, i love the way you end it: "you know the rest of the story"
10/10 yet again!
[Report This]Date: Feb 22, 2008 12:55 AM Title: William Dunbar
awesome, it explains heaps, but now william loves yumi, but ohh well!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Feb 20, 2008 02:44 AM Title: Odd Della Robbia
yay, i love odd, one of the best characters, and his mom sounds like the best mom aver, brocks a great guy, i would have never written another history off odds life story any better than this one, sounds very resonably accurate
[Report This]Date: Feb 17, 2008 07:09 PM Title: William Dunbar
Even though I don't fully support slash pairings...great job. =D
If you want me to say something constructive: it was very descriptive and true to William's character.
Gah, I hate being formal.
Date: Aug 13, 2007 07:26 PM Title: Franz Hopper
That story was so awesome! With all of the facts you put in it totally sounds like his real background story.