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Reviewer: virtugirl333 Signed 
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Date: Feb 13, 2008 05:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
[Report This]Date: Feb 13, 2008 05:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
Ooh, cliffy! Plese updte soon!
Reviewer: odd776 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2006 03:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
[Report This]Date: Nov 10, 2006 03:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
this is really asome story oddsgirlfriend its better then mine on a scale of 1 to 10 1000!
Reviewer: metrunui1 Signed 
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Date: Sep 18, 2006 05:51 PM Title: Chapter 4
[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2006 05:51 PM Title: Chapter 4
um, i think that you need to go over this a little more and tighten things up a bit. I like what is happening, but Cher Ami sounds more like a girls name then a boys name, and that confused me in the begining. and wasnt it Aelita that dropped the twins off? so how is she in Lyoko? good, but needs improvement 3.5 out of 5