Penname: HeirOfJeremie [Contact] Real name: Ben
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Lyoko! The Musical by Carth Rated: T [Reviews - 1] Table of Contents
Summary:

A musical adaptation of at least the prologue and first season of CL. Also my attempt at improving my songwriting skills by mimicking show tunes. Mostly follows the plot, with some changes and a lot of scenes written from whole cloth. And songs, of course, ableit songs that have only lyrics and no certain tune.

I have tried to make the whole thing realistically performable, but I think I took some liberties here and there, such as the extent to which you can control the behavior of a dog.


Categories: Seasons > Pre-Season 1, Seasons > Season 1 Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed: No Word count: 8215 Read Count: 11758
Published: Dec 31, 2009 Updated: Jan 06, 2010
Reviewer: HeirOfJeremie Signed
Date: Jan 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue + Act 1, Scene 1

I'll preface this by saying that, while there are no digits or Latin words in this username, I am in fact SilverPrince.

Kay, so reviewing. You, ma'am, are awesome. You do an awesome job at writing like an actual script, and I do like the occasional humorous tone you throw in.

As for characters, you made Odd a foreign transfer student. I've seen it done before, but never with a non-OC. It's a different approach, but I like it. And I think your characterizations are very believable. In fact, your characters respond to each other in more believable fashions than the actual show, I think.