Penname: Aelita [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: Jul 31, 2008
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Meh, there's not much. I like reading, writing, playing guitar, etc.
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Summary: Xana claims his first victim. One-shot. (If you're a friend of my art LJ, you may have already seen this one...)

Categories: Ships > Ulrich and Sissi Characters: Ulrich Stern
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes Word count: 711 Read Count: 1228
Published: Sep 06, 2006 Updated: Sep 06, 2006
Reviewer: Aelita Signed
Date: Nov 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow StarWay, this is AMAZING. I got chills. Ooh. lol.

Summary: A poem from Odd's POV on why, exacatly, the principal's daughter needs a fresh outlook.
Categories: Ships > Odd and Sissi Characters: Odd Della Robbia, Sissi Delmas
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes Word count: 141 Read Count: 1445
Published: Sep 15, 2006 Updated: Sep 15, 2006
Reviewer: Aelita Signed
Date: Nov 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG SO CUUUUUTE.

You're a really good writer!

Summary: She always wondered why she kept pushing him away until one night Hiroki opens her eyes. One-shot! WARNING: Takes place after "Straight to Heart" Minor spoilers inside!
Categories: Ships > Ulrich and Yumi Characters: Hiroki Ishiyama, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Challenges: Hidden Pain
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes Word count: 892 Read Count: 1594
Published: Oct 29, 2006 Updated: Oct 29, 2006
Reviewer: Aelita Signed
Date: Dec 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, this was great! You made one grammar mistake, when Hiroki said 'Was that you're boyfriend, Ulrich?' it should be 'Was that your boyfriend, Ulrich?' because it's a possessive instead of a contraction.

Otherwise, great! 10/10.

Summary: The second book in the New Kids on the Block series. Kazuya's having second doubts about his friends, until he follows Yumi to Stratford's way to reach Lyoko.
Categories: Seasons > Season 3 Characters: Jeremie Belpois, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: Action/Adventure, General
Warnings: None
Series: New Kids on The block
Chapters: 4
Completed: Yes Word count: 190 Read Count: 11827
Published: Nov 11, 2006 Updated: Nov 12, 2006
Reviewer: Aelita Signed
Date: Jul 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Lunch of Champions

Actually, you probably want to put "Je m'appelle Yumi" or "Je m'appelle Andrew" for the "je suis" part. You don't want to literally say "I am (je suis)"...French people don't speak like that.

Otherwise, somewhat short, but good :D

Reviewer: Aelita Signed
Date: Jul 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Kazuya saves the day..???

Andrew...I bet. I got kind of lost. You didn't explain very well. But other than that...I guess it was okay. You're trying a little too hard to put the languages you know in the story. Don't worry about it.

Summary: Jeremie isn't sure of Aelita anymore. She's become more argumentive by the day, and he's begginning to regret even finding her.
Categories: Ships > Jeremie and Aelita Characters: Aelita Hopper, Jeremie Belpois
Genres: Angst, Drama, Poetry, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: No Word count: 109 Read Count: 1427
Published: Dec 22, 2006 Updated: Dec 22, 2006
Reviewer: Aelita Signed
Date: Nov 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Hurts

Wow, this was amazing! *claps* The ending was so good. I've always thought Aelita had this kind of thing inside, she's too happy and peppy in the anime. There had to be a catch XD

Summary: Where do you turn when your mom runs away and you're pretty sure that your dad hates you?
Categories: Seasons, Seasons > Season 3 Characters: Aelita Hopper, Jeremie Belpois, Odd Della Robbia, Ulrich Stern, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Comedy, Drama, General, Poetry, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed: No Word count: 1975 Read Count: 4015
Published: Mar 02, 2007 Updated: Mar 24, 2007
Reviewer: Aelita Signed
Date: Nov 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Runaway

Wow, this seems realllly good! I'll be watching! *adds to favs*