Penname: Izzeban [Contact] Real name: Kita Keru
Member Since: Sep 28, 2006
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I write. Woohoo.

I am a Dance Dance Revolution addict.

My music has been featured on several websites, including LF's forums.  My site has more on that.


MSN IM: MSN IM hawithhahas [AT] hotmail [DOT] com
Gender: male
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Reviews by Izzeban
Summary: Sequel to "The New Girl" and second in series "To Understand." Odd finds he has feelings for the new girl, and Jeremie is torn between Aelita and Kaitie. Ulrich tries to bring Yumi back to him as she tries to ignore his protests. The team is falling apart, and only one person can bring it back together.
Categories: Ships, Ships > Jeremie and Aelita, Ships > Ulrich and Yumi, Ships > Odd and Aelita, Ships > Other, Seasons > Season 3, Ships > Jeremie and Yumi Characters: Aelita Hopper, Jeremie Belpois, Odd Della Robbia, Ulrich Stern, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: Action/Adventure, General, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: To Understand
Chapters: 8
Completed: Yes Word count: 1707 Read Count: 27026
Published: Oct 28, 2006 Updated: Jan 27, 2007
Reviewer: Izzeban Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: Nov 11, 2006 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Resisting Secrets

I like the whole series so far, and the direction it's heading in. Love triangles own. It reminded me that I needed to add a new story to my series now that Bridge is done...roffle.


Author's Response:

thanks. I actually based kaitie on myself (can you belive it? *laughs aloud*). Just one of my secrets, making some of my stories with a person alike me. I wont give any spoilers, but I'm making a new story called zanna, another romance story. I really work on things like that.

Oh, and THANK YOU for letting me know bridge is done, I love your story!! you went straight to my favorite authors list after I read the first few chapters. Bridge is my favorite story.  :)

 

Reviewer: Izzeban Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 25, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - What If

=O

Suspense rules. I can't wait to see the after-effects of this.

Although I shouldn't be talking myself,  since I haven't updated Bridge's sequel from the critical point I left it at

So yeah, keep up the good work. 



Author's Response:

lol. thanks, I had hoped someone would say that.I have the wildest ideas.

(You're lucky you're not in my head when I'm dreaming ^ ^) 

Summary: She always wondered why she kept pushing him away until one night Hiroki opens her eyes. One-shot! WARNING: Takes place after "Straight to Heart" Minor spoilers inside!
Categories: Ships > Ulrich and Yumi Characters: Hiroki Ishiyama, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Challenges: Hidden Pain
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes Word count: 892 Read Count: 1595
Published: Oct 29, 2006 Updated: Oct 29, 2006
Reviewer: Izzeban Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: Nov 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like this fic because it really stays in touch with Yumi's character throughout. The only negative comment I have is that, for a oneshot, it could have ben a bit longer, but otherwise, this is great reading material, and keep up the good work.

Summary:

Odd has admitted he loves Aelita, and now the two are dating! How will Jeremie cope? (Takes place during season 3).


Categories: Seasons, Ships, Ships > Jeremie and Aelita, Ships > Odd and Aelita, Seasons > Season 3 Characters: Aelita Hopper, Jeremie Belpois, Odd Della Robbia, Ulrich Stern, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed: No Word count: 643 Read Count: 6561
Published: Nov 04, 2006 Updated: Nov 24, 2006
Reviewer: Izzeban Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: Nov 12, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: The Void

Suspense!

Can't wait to find out what happens next. 

Summary: Odd is dead and brought back to life 10 years in the future. Xana in the meantime becomes inhabited in a body and rules the world under force.
Categories: Seasons > Season 3 Characters: Aelita Hopper, Jeremie Belpois, Odd Della Robbia, Ulrich Stern, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed: No Word count: 237 Read Count: 16030
Published: Nov 04, 2006 Updated: Nov 04, 2006
Reviewer: Izzeban Signed starstarstar
Date: Nov 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: The adventure begins

I'm intrigued. Please continue.

Summary: Odd tells Sissi he loves her dearly
Categories: Ships > Odd and Sissi Characters: Odd Della Robbia
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes Word count: 146 Read Count: 1348
Published: Nov 10, 2006 Updated: Nov 10, 2006
Reviewer: Izzeban Signed
Date: Nov 10, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: chapter1

A spell-check and some capitalization seriously wouldn't be a bad idea here.


Author's Response:

hey iam not the best spellers ok

 

Summary:

    Urich finaly gains the courage to ask Yumi out, only to find out that she is leaving. Is fate against the two of them, or is it fate binding them together.

 Parental Warning: there is sex in later chapters.


Categories: Ships > Ulrich and Yumi Characters: Aelita Hopper, Jeremie Belpois, Odd Della Robbia, Ulrich Stern, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: Sex
Challenges: A Novel Idea
Series: Bound by Fate
Chapters: 13
Completed: No Word count: 7888 Read Count: 44533
Published: Nov 16, 2006 Updated: May 21, 2007
Reviewer: Izzeban Signed starstarstarstar
Date: Nov 20, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: All or Nothing

I definitely like the direction this is going. It's well written with lots of yummy details (eveybody likes those!) and it can definitely go on to be one of the better stories here on LFF.

The only thing I would go for is a spell check at the end of each chapter. I found a few misspelled words, but I'm not going to be a grammar nazi right now ;)

Another thing I would consider dropping is the parental warning, since what it claims has not happened yet in the story and might be deemed spoilers for your own story. I'd add it in when the chapters it refers to are up. 

Another thing about the warning is the fact that some people might see at as a gimmick (since the top-favorited story on LFF has the same exact warning, some would say that you only put that in to steal the thunder generated by it)  although I don't see it that way.

Keep up the good work. I've got my own story to update.

Summary:

Season 3: Yumi's just told Ulrich that they could only be friends, but how does she realy feel?


Categories: Ships > Ulrich and Yumi, Seasons > Season 3 Characters: Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Challenges: Hidden Pain, Music said it All
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes Word count: 302 Read Count: 1320
Published: Nov 29, 2006 Updated: Nov 29, 2006
Reviewer: Izzeban Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: Nov 29, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Hidden Tears

I like the overall viewpoint on this story. So far, it's one of only two stories I've read that really make me believe that it's Yumi narrating and not the author. The only thing that stuck out was the fact that Yumi came off sounding like the Tourette's Guy, which isn't neccesarily a bad thing...

Keep up the good work, and stuff.