Jeremie and the Renault Factory

[Taelia offline]

I've been thinking about making a spoof of the 2005 Johnny Depp film Charlie and the Chocolate Factory. It will be called Jeremie and the Renault Factory.

Here's the cast list (some characters are TB3's, two are my OCs):

Charlie Bucket - Jeremie Belpois
Violet Beauregarde - Teria McPhearson
Mrs. Beauregarde - Jennifer McPhearson
Veruca Salt - Sissi Delmas
Mr. Salt - Jean-Pierre Delmas
Augustus Gloop - Odd Della Robbia
Mr. Gloop - Matthew Della Robbia, Odd's dad (^_^)
Mrs. Gloop - Penelope Della Robbia, Odd's mom
Mike Teavee - William Dunbar (they dress alike)
Mr. Teavee - William's dad
Willy Wonka - Franz Hopper

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Here's one of the songs made for the spoof, spoofed from a song from the movie:

Sissi Delmas, the teenaged brat
Went down the tube
That's all, that's that
And she will see as she descends
A very different set of friends

A very different set of friends
A very different set of friends

And if you think she's sweet, you'll see
How very mean that she can be
With perfume and cosmetics too
She bites off more than she can chew
And she is rather cruel as well
She has a rather horrid smell
Horrid smell

So she won't have no newfound friends
That she will meet as she descends
So she won't have no newfound friends

Who goes and spoils her, who indeed
Who panders to her every need
Who turns her into such a brat
Who is the culprit, who does that
The guilty one, now this is sad
Her mom is dead, but not her dad

[Tom Bone offline]

Very cool idea! Go for it!

[Taelia offline]

Do you really think so? Can anyone help me out?

[lyokowarriorteen20010 offline]

Sugestestion: Maybe you could make herve and nickolas the oompa loompas

[Jeremified offline]

Sugestestion: Maybe you could make herve and nickolas the oompa loompas

?!?!? Sorry, that just creeped me out at first. My brain twitches at the idea of them being oompa loompas. :toomuch;

[Taelia offline]

I dunno about that. And besides, it's not very original.

[Jeremified offline]

I dunno about that. And besides, it's not very original.

She's got a point.

[Taelia offline]

I need help coming up with several things for the story as well.

[lyokowarriorteen20010 offline]

LIke what fo example?

[Taelia offline]

1. Whether or not the ticket holders should live at Kadic or not.
2. The outfits that they'll wear on the day of the tour. (Illustrations are good, but I'm letting TB3 have a break)

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Here's the final version of the plotline:

Jeremie is a 13-year-old boy living with his parents in a house in Paris. Things begin a good turn in the road when Franz Hopper announces that he has placed "Virtual Tickets" into five of his Lyoko Bars. The finders of these special items will be given a full tour of Hopper’s famous candy factory (the inner workings of which are a tightly kept secret) and a lifetime supply of chocolate. Also, for one of the five ticket holders there will be a "surprise".

One by one, news reports from all over Paris reveal the teenagers who find the first four tickets. After a few attempts, some help from Aelita, a little luck and some money he found in the vending machine, Jeremie finally gets his virtual ticket.

The next morning Jer and Aeli arrive for the tour, led by the strange and eccentric candy man, Franz Hopper. During the tour, the first four ticket-winning teens, other than Jeremie, are one by one tempted by something extraordinary, resulting in an accident, causing the teen and the worried accompanying parent to be off the tour. Odd Della Robbia, a "svelte" overeater, falls into a river of chocolate in the Chocolate Room and is sucked away by a pipe. Competitive gum-chewer Teria McPhearson hastily chews a defective piece of gum that encases her in a Guardian. Spoiled brat Elisabeth Delmas demands to steal a robot for herself in the Circuitry Room, where she is attacked by the robots and thrown down a chute, deemed a "bad circuit". William Dunbar, who is obsessed with TV and video games, demands to be the first human transported over television waves (teleportation), causing him to be shrunken to miniature size. Each of the "accidents" occur after the teens refuse instructions against doing something, and each is followed by a song of morality. By the end of the day, each of the children leave the factory, looking exactly the way they were when they entered.

[Beowulf681 offline]

Great idea, go for it! I'll read it.