hello i am have a idea for a group fic,please help

[kid lyoko 2.0 offline]

i have this cool idea for a group fic, it is called Code Lyoko: Colliding Dimensions
I used to be part of another group working on this, but were disbanned, i hope that with people from here the story can live again

here is the info about it again, what do u think and i would like it if you work on this with me:

the whole fic, please read it and comment on it:


Code Lyoko: Colliding Dimensions

Introduction

The past two months had been agonizing for Jeremie. It was almost two months to the day since they had gotten Aelita out of Lyoko, finally. But as usual X.A.N.A. had screwed it up. On her way out, he had planted a virus in her, that forced the kids to let her live, if they killed him, Aelita would fall along side him. It was an excellent plan, Jeremie loved Aelita too much to let her die, and because of the humans weak emotions, XANA was set for life.

Jeremie had hacked into the school's mainframe and created a student profile for Aelita, a special profile that excluded her from normal class as a foreign exchange student. She was only required to be present for tests and exams, it was the perfect cover for her since she couldn't remain on Earth for ever.

And so it was, Jeremie had spent the lats two months running diagnostics on Aelita to try and purge her form the virus. He was so adamant in his quest that he seldom got any sleep, and he definately was lacking sleep today. As a reward for all the students scoring high on some sort of aptitude test, the school arranged for them to go on a retreat of sorts to Sergei National Park. It was here they would spend three days camping out under the stars, roasting marshmellows, and telling campfire stories, everyone was exited to go, except Jeremie. He was almost Zombie-like getting on the bus and would stay like that for the whole ride.

Chapter 1


"Jeremie? Jeremie, is something wrong?" Aelita asked. He'd been a little spacey on the whole trip.

"Huh? Oh, nothing Aelita. I'm just a little tired, I guess."

"Who can blame him?" Yumi said, popping up over the seat in front of him. "You've been running him all over the city since you got back." Aelita blushed a little.

"Oh. I'm sorry, Jeremie."

"Don't worry about it, it's alright, really, so long as I'm with you I don't care how tired I am."

Yumi slumped back down in her seat next to Ulrich.

"Hey, you're quiet. What is it with you guys here lately?" she asked him.

"I didn't sleep very well last night, I'll be fine once I wake up."

"Okay, I wonder how much longer till we get to...wherever it is we are going." Yumi glanced around the bus. It was a small bus, with two rows of four seats. In the seat behind the driver sat Jim, looming over the people on the bus like a vulture. Behind him Milly and Tamiya sat, fiddling around with their camera. Scattered along that same row, Sissi, Nicolas, and Herb sat. Nicolas made a sport of throwing things at Odd, which got on Odd's nerves. When looking at the people on the bus got too boring, Yumi turned and looked back out the window.

Trees. Lots and lots of trees. It was funny, they had spent about twenty minutes trying to explain to Aelita that this forest was okay. No giant hornets were going to fly at her firing lasers and poisonous goop.

"The only thing you have to worry about here is sunburn," Odd had said. That seemed to calm her down. Of course, then they had to explain to her what exactly sunburn was.

For the past few miles, all they had seen were trees. Yumi shrugged. At least it was quiet out here. For a second, she noticed a faint purple light, glowing deep in the woods. It was followed by a flash, and then it was gone.

A few hours had passed. Many of the passengers were asleep, and the only noise was the rolling of the wheels against the road. Jeremie had been sleeping, but Jim's voice woke him.

"We should have been there twenty minutes ago...and we have not even had any traffic. What's the excuse, then?"

"No, there is nothing wrong, please do not disturb me," replied the bus driver, casually brushing him off.

"Are you sure about that? Maybe you missed a turn," Jim retorted, letting only a little anger leak into his voice.

The driver did not respond, completely ignoring Jim this time. Jeremie thought something was strange about their driver's voice.

The bus stopped, but there were no signs anywhere near this place. Was this really Sergei National Park? It looked the same as every other place they had passed: lots of trees. The bus doors opened.

Jim woke up the sleeping kids and ordered everyone off the bus. Aelita complained of being a little light headed as if she would faint. Saying that to Jeremie only made him nevous and he made sure she didn't. The last thing he needed was for her to get hurt. So after arguing with Jim for a second, they convinced him to let them take Aelita away from the buses to get some fresh air.

"Uh, okay. But don't wander off too far now." After thanking him sincerely, the kids left the group.

Sissi followed them deep into the woods. Of course, with the children not knowing of the impending X.A.N.A. attack, they only lead themselves into danger. As a start, some of his monsters were ready to attack, waiting for the right moment to strike.

That was when it happened, the breach between the real world and Lyoko opened, and the crew, with the obvious exception of Jeremie, some how converted into their Lyoko forms. Not knowing why it happened, nor having the time to ask, they headed back towards the buses, fearing for what might've happened to their classmates. But then they heard Sissi scream. She was closer and the possibilty of X.A.N.A. attacking her was too great for them to ignore it; the buses would just have to wait.

The group headed towards Sissi, suspiciously observing her new look. The three-dimensional air it held, not to mention her loud scream, was a dead giveaway that something was very wrong.

"Dressing up early for Halloween?" Sissi asked derisively, smirking.

"What do you mean--" Urich started, looking down at himself. The first thing he noticed was that his katana was strapped to his belt, which was odd, considering he hadn't been wearing a belt only a moment ago. He was in his Lyoko form. Aelita, Yumi, and Odd took the cue and checked over themselves, noticing that they had all been transformed into their Lyoko A.I. bodies.

"Oh, no," Jeremie whispered. "It looks like Aelita and the others are in their Lyoko forms! That means X.A.N.A. is..."


that all i got: here are some notes:

the story is called Code Lyoko: Colliding Dimensions

the couples are: J/A,U/Y,O/S.

the plot is that somehow xana is able to use any outside power source to create a breach, a combtion between lyoko and the real world, now jim,herb,Nicolas,Milly and Tamiya knew the serect and sissi becomes a lyoko fighter.

their be some odd/sissi moments.


here is sissi lyoko form:
-Long black hair in a ponytail
-Pink and purple shirt with a flower pattern on her chest
-Skirt/pants combo [like Aelita's]
-Flat-bottomed shoes [pink and/or purple]
-Clawed gloves [like Odd's]
-Tail
-Pointed catlike ears

here move is laser slash


so would anyone like to help me get this story back on it's feet?

[Darkborn offline]

It's a nice Fan Fiction, but could you please place this on a website like Fanfiction.net and replace all this with a link? That's one of the Fan fiction thread rules. You also have 2 days to do it before a moderator will lock this topic.

[Reploid CB]

If you're unwilling to put it up at FF.net, putting it up at DeviantArt (if you have an account there/wanna make one there) is another option. But yeah, either way, preferably by Saturday, thanks.

[kid lyoko 2.0 offline]

well i was kinda hoping that this could be a group fic, i need some writers to help me write this story, well i am sorry i don't have an account on ff.net or DeviantArt.


i was hoping someone would help write this fic, well i didn't mean to break any rules

will someone help me out?