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Postby Quin Separable » Sun Jul 02, 2006 7:30 pm

Do you all remember that start I posted a while back? Well I have continued it and the story itself is nearing completion. 12 chapters are done so far, but however, only 1 is up.

Summery: William is tired of waiting for Ulrich to make a move. XANA attacks. Yumi’s life is thrown into chaos when things suddenly change…this time for the worse. Takes place is Season 2
Rating: Y-7 ~ Just like the series
Parings: Standard
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3021554/1/ or http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/35671792/


Enjoy! Constructive critism is always welcome!
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Postby mooshie » Fri Jul 07, 2006 1:02 am

very nice especially the dialogue the only bad thing is
[quote=fanfic]He fantasized for that day for come[/quote] sounds a little weird
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Postby Quin Separable » Mon Jul 10, 2006 10:52 pm

mooshie wrote:very nice especially the dialogue the only bad thing is
[quote=fanfic]He fantasized for that day for come
sounds a little weird[/quote]

really? hmm...

Well if anyone's interested, chapter 2 is up.
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Postby yumi/codelyoko » Wed Aug 22, 2007 4:05 pm

that was the coolest story ever :) you should write another one and unlike some other ones i read i diden`t fall asleep lol :snoring:
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Postby Sithking Zero » Thu Aug 23, 2007 12:45 am

Again, this thread hasn't been posted on in over a year. Necroposting, please lock.
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