CL Fan Fic

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Thanks Ulrich M. Stern for telling me about this place. Most of you know me as Jym. Ulrich M. Stern asked me to come here and post my fan Fic.

the gang is sitting at the lunch table. Odd as usuall is eat ing more than anyone.
U:Xana is getting stronger, and it's getting harder to fight him.
Y:Yah, protecting Ailita is almost impossable
J: I'm working on some pogrames to help ou out in Lyoko
A(lita):how long do you think that will take?
J:a while, complicated programes like these, take a long time
*odd pauses eating long enough to add*
O:yah, but we need help now
A:I've been thinking, maby we need someone else to come to lyoko, and help us fight xana.
J:that would be risky, it would need to be someone we trusted fully.
O:and it would have to be someone who doesn't mide sneaking out of class to go there.
U: I don't think it;s a good Idia, who would we let come to lyoko?
** if answering his Q: william walks up behind yumi. The gang lookes at eachother, all thinking the same thing. Yumi looks at Ulrick, not wanting to upset him. Ulrick knows how importent saving ailita is, and silently nods at yumi. Choosing her words carefully, yumi began...*
Y:William, we need you to know some thing,
*odd jumps in quickly, before anyone could change there minds. he tells william quickley everything about Lyoko, and Ailita. William listens poliely, but obviously doesn't belive what Odd is saying*
J:maby we should show you
Y:come with us.
-*they start off to the factory. Ulrick hangs back a bit, not sure if he likes the idia of william entering there tight riendship, and driving more of a wedge between him and his true love Yumi. By the time they get to the factory, Jerremy has explained everything to William more clearly. William looks shocked apon entering the factory.*
W:Amazing
J:if your going to fight Xana, your going to need a virtual apperence, and a weppon.
*after about 15 min., jerremy has created a costume that looks some what like ulricks. Jerrimy is showing William what he has made on the computer screen.*
J:these claw like things on your hands, I got from Odd. wou can us them like that wolf guy in X-men. your special ability, at the cost of 15 life points, is a ball of fire, you can shoot from your left hand(*like star fire*)
your craft is a proto-type of a hoverbord I was making for Odd. it had handles, and a realitively weak, lazer canon. it will take quite a few direct hits with it to kill a monster.
Y:why don't we go to Lyoko, and show william around.
Jk, but be careful
*since there are only 3 scaners, ulrickgoes last. they land in the forest region*
A:welcome to my world, what do you think?
*not used to being virtualised, William is a bit shaky, and doesn't answer right away.
O:Check this newb!
*he does some fancy tricks with his overboard, and shoots some lazer arows. Ulrick, trying to impress yumi, jumps in front of them, and blicks them with his sward. Yumi gives him a demenstration with her fan. William practices and gets pretty good.

end chapter 1.ell me how you like it. I've been (way)behind on the show, so for all I know, this same story has already happend[/i]

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chapter 2.

*The next few days, Xana was quiet, so william practeced more in lyoko, and got detales of everything. Ulrick, is still feelig bad about the whole thing, and odd trys to chear him up*

O:hows it going? I'll bet you live having William know about lyoko(*sarcasem evedent*).
U:what-ever
A:don't worry, soon Jerremy will will be able to isolate and destroy the virus so we can * down the whole super computer.
*yumi runs up, breathing heavally*
Y:did you hear on the raidio, there is a strange monster attacking Paris. they described it alot like one of Xanas' monsters.
*sissy walks up to ulrick*
S(issy): oh ulrick dear, did you notice that William has been spending alot of time with your "precious" Yumi? maby it's time to let go of her and come to me.
U:I;m really not in the mood to deal with you now
*Odd, in a supprising show of carring(not tainted with a joke, or sarcasem) steps in for Ulrick.*
O:why don't you leave him alone...or I might send kiwi after you
*William runs out from the building(I may have forgotten to mentoin that this sean is outside, on the grounds)*
W:I just came from Jerremy, he says Xana's attackinggg...oh
*he sees sissy, and remembers that no ones suposed to know about xana*
Y:Oh yah the home work you were helping me with, the FICTIONAL story about a Xana we made up.
S(issy):hey yumi, looks like your boy friends here

Y:get lost Sissy
*sissy leavs with her usual heumph william says in an urgent voice*
W:XANA'S ATTacking. theres an activated tower
Y:I was right, what I heard on the raidio was xana
A:come on

end chapter2. this chapter was really not importent to the plot, but I didn't want to make it sound like everything happens whinin hours of eachother
the next part should be better

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chapter3 our heroes make there way to the factoy, and find Jerremy already there

Jk, looks like we're faceing a rutine attack. you know the drill
*he turns to William*
J:William, since this is your first time batteling Xana, let the others go first
*he nods, to captued in the Idia of his first virtual battle When they get to lyoko, they are in the polar region, there are a few monsters, and the activated tower.*
U:I'll take those
*he points to a small group of blocks ((because I'm behind on whats happening, I don't know what new monsters xana has. use your imagination)). William who is eager to prove himself, and impress yumi, runs infront of ulrick and starts attacking the monsters*
W:hieeeea!
U:hey, I have these, go help Odd.
W:I can handle them
U:move over, there mine!
*they continue to argue, still thinking that yumi is watching. but no, yumi and Odd are despratly trying to hold off the rest of the monsters.
suddenly, one of the mosters grabs ailitan and starts sucking out her memory. Ailita screems. before it does thouh, Ulrick sees it and hastily attacks it. It lets go
(I can't put in words jerrimys concern for alita, but I'll do my best)
J:Ailita are you ok? are you hurt? talk to me!
A:yah, I'm ok. lets dactivate this tower,and get back to earth.
*Ailita is very weak, and can't run. she draggs herself to the tower, and goes through the process of deactivating it. jerrimy matirialises them jerrimy is fuming mad at ulrick and wiliam. Ailita is as sweet as ever, but incredably weak. Odd is mad, that he had to fend off the monsters himself*
J:your guys **** bloody argument almost cost us Ailitas memory! I new we shouldn't tell anyone about Lyoko! We should have waited untill I finished my programes!
O:thanks for the help fighting xana.
*Jerremy gets up, and hugs Ailita. he starts sobbing softly into her sholder*
Jh, AIlita, I should have never let any one else in. I-we almost lost you.
*he regains his composure and stands up*
J:Ailita, I love you. I'm going to find an antidote for the virus, even If I have to stay up every night for a year.
A:don't worry jerremy,I'm ok, I'm ok.
Y:William, we have to talk, can wego outside?
W:yah ok
*after yumi and William leave, Jerremy turns venomesly on Ulrick*
J:WHAT WERE YOU THINKING? THIS IS NOT ABOUT YOU AND WILLIAM FIGHTING FOR YUMI! IT"S ABOUT AILITA!!!
*both Odd and ulrick are shocked that Jerrimy has brought the problem out in the open, and has put it in such simple , streight forward language. Ulrick runs out.*
O:harsh

end chap.3






chapter 4 (right now I'm very frusterated! twice my story was deleated when I was about to submit it. so I put on the CL theme song, and it has given me the strenght to continue, but you better like it!)


*after th Lyoko Fiasco, the group seperated. Ulrick was to emberrised to face jerremy, Yumi didn't want to make thing worse by talking to William or Ulrick. Jerremy is still mad at Ulrick and William for what hapend. Ailita is sitting with Jerremy in his room. she is on the bed, and he is sitting at the computer.*
A:you shouldn't be so mad at Ulrick
J I almost lost you Ailita, thats un forgiveable
A:but I'm here now, and I'm ok. Remember,all last year, Ulrick faught Xana for me. He still cares, but he's worried that William will take yumi from him.
J:Well i'm working on destroying our virus and setting you free. Then we can go togther to a special school or the gifted.
*he gets up and walks uo to Ailita. she rises, and he slowly reaches or her hands. they go through the usual drama rutine of kissisng. as they are breaking away, Ulrick barges in and sees...He makes a move for the door, then thinks twice. he is emberrised, and stammers*
U:uh..uhm... there are some monsters outside I think you should see.
*Jerremy, is a bit perterbed that Ulrick has ruined his perfect moment. he glanses out the window*
J:I don't see anything stange
*his computer beeps, and he lets go of Ailita and sits at his computer.*
J:Hmmm... thats weird
A:what?
J:some things happening on Lyoko, but I can't tell what it is
I don't see any activated towers.
*suddenly, there is a scream outside. they run out, and see people running around in panick. Yumi runs up to him, with odd and William behind her.*
A:whats happening?
*sissy runs rom round the corner screeming, and lands in Ulricks arms. he shoves her away just as a mega tank rolls after her. A spider comes from the other direction. sissy screems and runs away*
J:we have to get to the factory...NOW!
O:right behind you!
*they run to the factory scirting a few monsters on the way. when they get there
Jerremy turns to william, and says*
J:william, you stay here, and guard the outside of the factory!
W:But...
Y:it's ok william, you stay here.
*she pecks him on the cheek, and Ulrick turns away*
Jk, everyone into the scanners!
they run ino the scaners and Jerrimy virtualises them.
J:Ailita, do you feel any pulsations?
A:no, wich way should we go?
J:I don't know, go to sector 5.
*they run off in the direction of sector 5. Jerrimys cell phone rings. It's wiliam.*
W:Jerremy! I need help! I can't hold off these monsters...(static)
J:hold on, I'm sending over some monsters of my own to help you. I've been working on these to help in Lyoko, but I think I can matirialise them and send them to help.
*Jerremy is able to make 3 small monsters, like hornets. they had a small target in the middle of there bodys. they had lazer guns, and were pretty accurate. they appeared over williams head and started attacking a large spider that was fireing on william.

end chap. 4 I had more, but I'm tired. I'll try to post more tonight if I can

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Ok I'm I yOUR oNLY fAN???

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Oh If You Didnt know there have vehicles


Odd:OverBoard


Ulrich:OverBike


Yumi:OverWing

William:Whatever you write

Aieltia:Rides With Yumi Most Often
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Chap…whatever I’m up to

O: laser arrow!
*a crab is blown out of existence*
U:Jerremy, can you boost the speed of our viecles?
J: I can try
*suddenly Ulricks overbike sepeeds out of control*
J: sorry about that
*William calls Jerremy*
W: some thing really weird is going on out here. Things are starting to look like they do in Lyoko, like…
J:like Xana is transforming earth into a copy of Lyoko? I was afraid of something like this. Instead of two parallel, but opposite worlds, it has become two exactly eaqual univirses!
*he is interrupted by Yumi (who is still in Lyoko)*
Y: Jerremy, what’s that?
*she pointed to a large disk in the sky with Xana symbols on it.*
A:I think it’s one of xanas’ new monsters!
J:this one is POWERFUL! Be extra careful!
J:Ulrick, your sward isn’t going o stop a laser from this one!
U:what?!
*Ulrick had just jumped in front of a large laser that had been shot at Ailita*
J:Hold on! I’m getting you out of here!
*he de-virtualises ulrick, right as the laser is about to hit him. Ailita runs away. Before anyone could say anything, they were de-virtualised also.(I use the word de-virtualised, and not matirialised for a reason)*
O:hey! What was that for?
*he steps out of the scanner, and realizes something is wrong*
O:um… Jerrimy…I think you forgot to change my chlothes. I’m still dressed as a cat!
Y:,U:,A,:us also! You forgot to change our chlothes!
J:no. this is how you look on earth now. Xana has transformed earth into a copy of Lyoko!
A:how do we shut him down?
J:I don’t know

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Part 1 Chapter 1 (from now on, my story is going to be divided into sections, and each section is Going to have 3 or 4 chapters. EACH CHAPTER BY ITSELF, ISN’T GOING TO MAKE MUCH SENSE, THEY MAY SEEM INCOMPLEAT. This is because A: I’m not going to have as much time anymore to post long chapters, B: I want to drag the story out a bit. C: it’ll keep you on the edge of your seat. I hope you like it. Enjoy)

U:what do you mean, you don’t know how to stop Xana?
J: we have to go out and see if there is a way. In theory there is. I just don’t know what it is
*William runs in, injured from fighting the monsters. Yumi runs over to him*
Y: William, are you ok?
W: yah, why are you dressed like that?
J: no time to explain. Get into the scanner. The rest of you, go to school. We’ll meet you there. And be careful! I don’t know what will happen if you lose all your life points.
U: ok
O: Let’s go!
*they run out of the factory, and head to the school. William gets into the scanner, and Jeremy changes him into his Lyoko coustume.*
A: Look at all the monsters! How could xana get so many?
O:Lazer Arrows! This is fun!
*he dodges a lazer, and ulrick stabs the monster. It blows up, and they continue on*
Y: We’re almost there! Watch out for those monsters over there
*they get to the school, and almost wish they hadn’t. *
A: Oh gosh, how did xana posess so many people?
*ulrick smashes someone in the back of the head with the flat side of his sward. *
Y: Ulrick! Behind you!
*she runs up, and punches sissi, just as she is about to kiss ulrick, and posess him.*
U:thanks
*Jerrimy and William run up*
J:I think I have an Idia! We have to go to the hermitage
End chap



Part one chapter 2

*as the gang, starts running twards the Hemitige, here way is blocked by a group of spiders. Yumi touches her temples, and a near by car is sent flying through the spiders.
A few blow up, and the rest are incapacitated.
J: you shoukdn’t do that! Using telekinetics takes uses life points. I don’t know what will happen if you lose all your life points.
A: but it was ok because we could have lost a lot more life points fighting them
J: I guess
*Ice suddenly pops up all around them, and it became very cold.*
W: I guess Xana is turning this itto the polar reagon
U: com on! We have to keep going
J: I agree, Xana is getting stronger, we have to stop him!
A:look at that! That tall building is glowing red!
*Everyone is to busy fighting monsters to notice. Ulrick and William have perfected the art of working together, and are doing a beautiful on some unfortunate monsters. Yumi and Odd are doing just as well. Jerremy is doing his best with a piece of pipe*
J: come on!
Y: ok, lets go
*they all head off to the woods where The Hematige is. It appears that Xana wants this area to be the forest regon. Virtual trees are appearing in place of the real ones*
A: Xana is working fast.
U: we have to hurry!
*Ailita looks behind her, and ghasps. 5 large, Xana possessed wolfs have just appeared from behind some trees. Ailita gets extreamly scared, and using her terrain changing ability, to put a huge wall between her and the wolfs. Jerremy is about to tell her off, but Kkows how scared she was and doesn’t say anything about the wasted life points. Now they come out of the woods, and stand infront of the hermitage*
Yh no
U: it looks exactly like sector 5

End chapter/ section 1
are any other american idiots besids the original reading my story?(no offense) They mived my story to P. 2 oh well

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Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2005 12:44 AM Post subject:

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I wasn't going to post this untill tomorow, but I'm board, and i want to see how lin it'll be untill someone replies (money down on American Idiot being first, and possably only reply)

Part II chap. 1

J:I don’t think it is a good Idia to go in there
O: Why not?
J: because if you do, two very bad things are likely to happen. One is you get all your life points lost, then you are possably lost for ever. Two, if you do manage to shut down Xana, he would probably shut down earth also. We have to find a way to separate the two worlds again, before we can shut him down.
U:but you were the one who told us to come here.
J; I had a feeling that this would be one of the first places Xana would change. I was right, but I didn’t know what he would do with it.
Y: sooo what do we do now?
A: I think I know, I saw back there, a building that seemed to be glowing red. You were all to busy fighting to realize.
W: so do we have to go there?
A: I think so
*they start running off back to the building that Ailita mentioned. They have to fight a few small monsters, and one or two zombified people, but on all the trip was un eventful.*
A:there!
W: hold on princess, we’re busy fighting monsters, give us a sec.
O: Lazer arrow!

Y: Ailita! Watch out behind you!
*she throws her fan, just in time to destroy a manta (skitzola?) approaching on her. Un fortuanetly, this made her open to attacks.*
U: Yumi!
*he runs up and blokes the lasers just shot at her*
Y:thanks

J: Ailita! Run now!
*she runs for the building, which now is looking very close in appearance to an activated tower. She skirts some destroyed cars, and spiders, just before she enters she yells*
A: what code should I put in?
*everyone looks a Jerremy*
J: sorry, the codes are your department. Just do what you feel is right
*Ailita enters, and flotes up to the top platform. She puts in a code…the first that comes to mind. Suddenly, all the data starts to fall down, then there is a big flash, and a bang Ailita exits*
A:did it work?
Y: Sort of… look
*the terrain is of lyoko, but it is criss crossed by roads, and dotted with buildings Alita looks confused*
J:You fused lyoko and earth. Now there are no two worlds, but one part lyoko/ part earth world
End chapter one. I am depressed. No one is reading my story, and I can’t watch code lyoko. I miss Ailita, Jerremy, Yumi, and Ulrick. Is it at all possible to watch the show on-line, or to have someone stream the show to me?

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Here Are Some Clips

http://media.codelyoko.fr/saison2_promo ... etwork.wmv



OverBike
http://media.codelyoko.fr/saison2_overbike.wmv


OverWing
http://media.codelyoko.fr/saison2_overwing.wmv

Sector 5
http://media.codelyoko.fr/saison2_5eme_territoire_1.wmv

This Is More OF Sector 5
http://media.codelyoko.fr/saison2_5eme_territoire.wmv

Heres Another Clip But Its In French
http://media.codelyoko.fr/saison2_video_globale.wmv

Ok Thats All I Got
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You Might Find More At This Site Where I Got Them All From

http://www.codelyoko.fr/index2.php?page=musvideos
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Part II chapter II

A: you mean now everyone is virtual?
J: No, I don’t think so, only people like us who are like us, and have virtual forms.
Y: so what about everyone else?
U: I think that will answer your question
*he pointed to milly, who was frozen stiff, and to herve who was possessed*
J: I think most people were frozen like Milly, but a select few were chosen by Xana to serve him.
W: why does he want them to serve him?
O: Simple…To destroy us
A: And to take my memory so he can become stronger.
O: although I don’t think Xana can be much stronger than he is now.
W: what will happen to us now?
J: My guess is he will kill us, but Ailita he has to keep alive, because they are for some reason, very closely connected.
U: you mean the Virus?
J: No the virus just makes the connection stronger stronger. Xana needs Ailita, so he would never actually kill her.
A: you mean even with the Anti Virus, we’re still connected?
J: Not quite, he can live, but the virus helps him be powerful.
U: That’s great, but I think now we should worry about stopping this Xana attack, and separating earth from Lyoko.
W: I’ll bet there are still towers that we can use to stop Xana.
J: not towers, but some other kind of building
Y: how do you know this?
J: It’s my best guess with what I could decipher from Hoppers notes, and Diary.
W: Let’s get going then
O: yah, lets kick some Xana butt!
A: ok, lets go.
*They run off together, on one of the roads, not in any one direction, but where ever Ailitas visions told them to go*
O: I’m down to 25 life points, I think. If I lose them all I die?
J: yes
Y: that’s bad, and I only have 50 left
U: don’t worry Yumi, I have most of mine, and I’ll keep you safe
W: Grrrr
W: Ok, come on, lets keep looking
*they run on, and are UN successful in finding a way to stop Xana. They are constantly being attacked*
U: There, what is that?
A: That’s it, the one I was in envisioning
J: it looks kinda like what Franz Hopper Described.
* Not far from them, about 10 yards. From the Void, was a low, flat long building*
O: I only have 8 Arrows left
Y: And I lost one of my fans already
J: don’t worry if Franz hopper was right, then this should do the trick.
W: Lets go!
*He runs a t some monsters, slashing furiously at them with his claws. Ulrick runs in to help also. Odd shoots a few Arrows, but doesn’t want to get to involved it the fight, for fear of being deleted. Yumi takes on some hornets*
J: This is bad, there are way to many monsters, and we’re all weak. I don’t know if we can beat Xana this time.
*Odd has now run out of laser arrows, and is UN protected from the lasers flying all around him*
A: I think I know what I have to do
*She walks over to Jeremy, and kisses him*
A: Good bye
* She walks over to the Void, and just as odd is about to be Deleted, gracefully dives over the edge.*
J: Ailita… NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
*Suddenly everything goes back to normal. There is no time jump, but no one besides he gang remembers anything*
J: NOOO Ailita, she… she… she’s gone
*He breaks down crying in front of the computer, half hoping that her face would appear on the screen… It didn’t. He felt a soft hand on his shoulder… he turned around… and saw… Yumi*
Y: We all miss her
O: I don’t understand, what happened?
U: she knew, that if she was Deleted, Xana would die, so she jumped into the void
J: she sacrificed herself for us
• *He starts crying again.*
• J: Oh Ailita, I miss you, I LOVE YOU… I finished the Anti Virus… not that it will help you much now
• *more tears (( this part was really hard for me to write BC. I also love Ailita))
• *Then from the scanner room comes William and…Ailita!*
• J: Ailita? But how?
• A: I didn’t really jump into the void, Xana disguised the building to stop him, as the void, and made a separate building, and heavily guarded It so we would attack it. When I jumped in, I went through a long tunnel, then I came out here.
• U: so we can cure Ailita now and shut down Xana for ever?
• J: no, even IF we cure Ailita, It’s to big of a risk that Xana attached a copy of Ailitas Virus to Earth, so if we were to shut him down, we would shut down earth also.
• Y: But it’s ok, right? Because if we cure Ailita, it will weaken Xana to the point where He can’t do any harm
• J:yes

End chap II. ( don’t worry, I still have a chapter 3 for this section) and thanks for the clips

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*On the school grounds, everyone is walking*
O: so when are we inserting the Anti virus into Ailita?
J: Soon, I just want to fix a few things
W: But I thought you said you were done.
J: I am, but I don’t want to accidentally make it so she can never feel connected to anyone, not just Xana
U: you especially
*Jeremy looks embarrassed*
*A few days later, they all assemble at the scanners*
J: Ok, just go to the tower, and from there I will be able to insert the anti virus*
*they are all virtualized, and head for the tower*
Y: When we are not fighting Xana, this place is kind of nice
O: the kind of place I would like to hang out at some time
U: come on, let’s just finish this
*Ailita enters the tower, and we hear Jeremy’s voice*
J: Ok, just do what you normally do, and when you put your hand on the screen, don’t take it off. I will put in the Anti virus.
A: Ok
*she does as she’s told, when she puts hr hand on the screen, she feels a warm feeling flowing through her body, then…*
A: ow!
*she almost jerked her hand away*
J: NO STOP don’t take away your hand. That’s just Xana resisting. If you take away your hand, it could have disastrous effects on you
*finally he is done, and Jeremy materializes everyone. As Ailita steps off the scanner, he runs up and hugs her*
J: Ailita! With or with out Xana I love you, and now hat your free from him, I want to help make your life here as good as possible.
W: I think you’re all forgetting something. If Xana can’t be shut down, then we have to make sure that no one finds the factory, and brings Xana back to power, and that no one cuts power to the super computer
U: I still have that Lottery ticket I was going to give to you yumi, so you could stay, but we can use it to buy the factory.
• A few months later, Ailita is holding the deed to the factory in her hands, and everyone is hugging. After that Jeremy put an Add in the News paper. It said:

ARE YOU LOOKING FOR A NEW VACATION FOR YOUR FAMALY?
TRY OUR LYOKO VACATION.
ACTIVITIES INCLUDE:
Hiking in the forest
Ice skating in the polar region
Climbing in the mountain region
Over – racing
And swimming in the sea
POSSABILATYS ARE VIRTUALLY UNLIMITED CALL FOR MORE INFO

Y: nice add
J thank you
END story. I have a short epilog/ sequel coming

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Posted: Fri Nov 25, 2005 3:51 AM Post subject:

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Sequel to A CL STORY
(Come on PPL! Does anyone like my story? I guess the fact that it wasn’t locked is a good sign, but still is ANYONE reading m story?)

*this is taking place about 15 years from now. Jeremy is a professional programmer, and he is married to Ailita, who runs the Lyoko Vacation site, and Military training site. Odd is Lyokos best and only tour guide. Ulrich and Yumi have finally admitted their love, and are dating steady. Ulrich is a semi Pro soccer player, and Yumi goes with him to all his games around the world, but they always return to be with Jeremy and Lyoko. William has gone off on his own*

A: Jeremy honey?
J: Yes Ailita
A: Today when I was at one of the towers doing Maintenance I felt some thing strange, like I felt when Xana had power.
J: Don’t worry Ailita, no matter what I will protect you. But for now I’m sure it’s nothing. When Ulrich and Yumi come back from there soccer game in America we will all check it out. Ok?
A: Yah ok.
*two weeks later*
O: How was your game?
A: Did you win?
U: Nope I didn’t win, but we gave them a run for there money.
Y: Ulrich, tell them the other news…
J: wait. Before you tell us, I just want to say that I think we should all go to Lyoko. Ailita felt some thing, and I think we should go to sector 5 just to be safe
Y: Ailita, really? Are you ok? It was probably nothing.
A: Yah, I’m ok, but I’m pretty sure it had something to do with Xana.
J: All we have to do is go there, make sure that every things ok, then we can come back.
*Jeremy sits at the now aging super computer*
J: wow, it’s been a while since I’ve done this. Transfer…scanner…Virtualization!
J: Ok. Everyone to sector 5
Y: just like old times
*they get to sector 5. Everything is deathly quite, no timer, no monsters Ailita is checking Xanas hard drive*
A: Nothing seems out of place
*Suddenly*
J: Guys, watch out! The walls are starting to close in!
*They run out, just before the walls shut. Odd in his tour guide voice*
O: And over here, you see a Xana Monster. But please, do not panic, your guide is trained, and experienced in this matter…LASER ARROW!
*the monster blows up easily*
U: Whats going on?
J: I don’t know, I thought Xana was to weak to make monsters
A: nothing seemed weird when I checked it just now.
Y: Jeremy, is anything happening on earth?
*Jeremy logs on to a news site*
J: Oh crap you guys are not going to belive this

End sequel chap 1(one more chapter should finish it up. Plz reply ppl!)

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Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2005 3:12 AM Post subject:

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Sequel Chap 2

O: What? What?
A: did Xana possess some one?
J: No, thankfully he doesn’t have that much power.
U: than what happened?
J: it seems Xana has taken over a piece of military equipment…
A: what kind of equipment?
J: I’m not sure yet, they haven’t released yet to the public what it is… hold on
*he expertly hacks a military radio transmission, and decodes it*
J: it seems that a test model of an AUV (aerial UN manned vehicle) has mysteriously lost control and is heading in a UN known direction, carrying high explosives.
U: I didn’t know xana had gained so much power.
J: I don’t know how he did it
Y: can you still use the supper scanner to see if any towers are activated?
J: of course
J: it looks like in the mountain region, there is an activated tower. I’ll send over your vehicles so you can get there faster
• *We see, over the ocean, a weird looking plane like thing flying fast towards a city. Change to Army base- soldiers running around.
• Commander: can’t anyone shut it down?
• Soldier 1: No sir, we have lost all control of it
• Commander: It’s headed right for New york city! We have to shut it down, or the whole tri-state area will be obliterated
• Soldier 1: It should run out of fuel before then, but hen again, I can’t be sure*
U: I’ve kinda lost my touch with this over bike
O: naw, it’s like riding a bike
Y; I forgot how fun this could be
A: this isn’t about fun, we have to deactivate the tower.
J: ok, we have a few blocks and a crab. I hope you remember how to fight
O: No sweat! Laser arrow!
*Yumi throws her fan, but misses horribly.*
Y: Oops. I need some practice
U: I think I still have the nack with this
*he expertly blockes some lasers, but gets hit in the chest*
Y: Are you Ok?
U: yah
A: watch out!
*a block comes up, and charges it’s laser, aiming at Ulrick. Ailita makes a rock wall between them, and runs off in the direction of the tower.*
Y: That was close, let’s finish up these monsters.
*we see over the ocean the plane coming very close to the city. There are a few helicopters around it, not wanting to blow it up for fear of being blown up themselves *
O: that’s it, Last hit for me. Good luck guys.
*He matirialises, and the rest are left alone with the remaining monsters. Just as the plain is starting to fly over the city, Ailita enters the tower. We hear below the plane, police with bull horns, advising people to take cover in basements. A bomb drops, and starts falling down…down…down
Ailita puts her hand on the screen
A-i-l-i-t-a
Code:
L-y-o-k-o
Squares of data fall.
At the city, the bomb hits…and falls apart.*
J: whew. Close one
*back at the park, they are all talking*
J: You guys really cut it close this time
Y: well we’re out of practice
A: looks like we’re going to be fighting Xana a lot.
O: at least we have the whole army now to help.
J: NO! if the army found out about Xana, they would do all kinds of tests on Ailita, and maby try to clone her, so she could have more chance of stopping Xana, and that could be dangerous
*Yumis cell phone rings*
Y: um… this is a number I haven’t seen in a long time… it’s William
U: Answer it
*she answers it*
Y: Hello?
W: hi, I heard about the strange AUV incident, did it have something to do With Xana?
Y: yes, but we stopped it
W: well ok, but if you ever need any help, I happen to be working in France, and I can come over to the factory…or as you now call it: Virtual vacation to help you fight Xana
Y: um ok thanks
*hangs up*

U: did you tell everyone about our surprise?
Y: no, lets tell them now
A: What?
Y: after last game… Ulrick per posed to me. see
*she shows them the ring*
A: it’s beautiful… almost as beautiful as the one you gave me Jerremy
*Jerremy blushes*

……..And everyone lived happily ever after (or a happy as you can be with Xana around)
THE END.
I hope you liked it. This was my first fan fic. Should I do another one If I get an Idia for one?

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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2005 1:42 PM Post subject:

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Sequel #II

A: I can’t wait to tell Ulrich and Yumi about everything that has happened since they left for there last game.
J: The plane should arrive any minute.
O: there it is
*a few minutes later
Ailita is hugging Yumi*
A: How was it?
U: not bad.
J: did you win?
Y: Yes! Ulrich won, by 2 points.
U: It was a close game
Y: so tell us, while we were in Japan, we heard a lot of things about UN explained things happening, was it Xana?
J: Yes, we had 3 Xana attacks in one week. I didn’t want to activate any return trips and make Xana stronger. The last time, was really close
O: Yah, we had to call William for back up
Y: oh…
O: did you invite William to the wedding?
U: no
Y: but maybe we should, after all, he is our friend, and has helped stop Xana on numerous occasions.
U: what ever
J: come on, let’s go down to baggage claim and get your stuff...
End chap. 1
more tomorow

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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2005 9:07 PM Post subject:

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Chap II
*Odd is leading a group of vacationers through the forest region, Ulrich and Yumi are about to get on a plane to go to Brazil for a championship game*

Tourist: hey, whats that thing over there?
*he poins to a crab that just came out from behind a tree*
O: um…um…It’s a new program that is being tried out
*He shoots a laser arrow at it and it blows up*
O: heh heh…um this way to the tower
*he hangs back, and calls to Ailita who is running the computer*
O: did you see that?
A: yah, I just called Jeremy he should be over soon. I also called Ulrich and Yumi to see if they can, because I know there is more than just that that monster waiting for you.
*at the airport Ulrich’s cell phone rings*
Flight attendant: Sir, you have to turn off your Phone while on the Plane
U: yes, just a sec
*he looks at Yumi with a look that can only mean one thing*
U: Team, I have to go something came up. I’ll be there ASAP
*they leave the lane in a rush and run off to the car they arrive at the factory a little bit after Jeremy. *
Y: what’s going on?
J: I don’t know for sure yet, I just sent in Ailita you guys go to the scanner room
U: Ok
*they virtualized next to odd and Ailita, and a group of tourists*
Tourist: Whoa what’s going on?
A: We are trying out a new activity, here. You guys will be the first to test it.
*Odd under his breath to Ailita*
O: nice cover story
J: ok, there is a huge army of various monsters. I am sending everyone down there weapons
*various different weapons appear in the hands of the tourists*
J: Ailita, head to the tower with Ulrich, everyone else will hold off the monsters.
Odd, you organize these people, and Yumi will start fighting
O: Ok people. The point of the “gameâ€

[Star Way]

You have obviously not read the rules for this forum, have you? You may want to.

In any case, you need to find a way to link to this an not post it right onto the forum. If you cannot/will not do that within two day's time, we will lock your thread.

[jym2 offline]

sorry, my bad
http://www.codelyoko.com/forum/forumen/ ... hp?t=26995

[yumi/codelyoko offline]

that was a good story but aren`t you supposed to put it in a link ??? any way nice twist

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Okay, see, what we have here is NECROPOSTING. For future referance, please don't do this.

Mewberries? TB3? Stephen? CB?

LOCK, PLEASE!

[Mewberries151]

Okay, see, what we have here is NECROPOSTING. For future referance, please don't do this.

Mewberries? TB3? Stephen? CB?

LOCK, PLEASE!

Indeed. ^^; Yumi/CodeLyoko, I know you're still new, but please be aware of the dates of the topics you're posting in. A lot of them are old and bumping them to the top is spam.

Thanks.

Locking.