Long ago, Ulrich hunted down a man named Danchrio. Though the public knew him as a terrorist, the CL gang knows him as something from X.A.N.A. Though Ulrich at first suspects he defeated this scanner beast, he soon begins to see repeating patterns. The things that it was just before Danchrio had first surfaced 10 years ago. Can Ulrich put an end to this unfinished fight?
(I was taken off guard by the unique fanfiction rules here the first time. This time, I've got it down.)
"The Unfinished Fight"
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The Unfinished Fight
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The Unfinished Fight
by The BB of C » Fri Feb 10, 2006 3:56 pm
by lyokowarriorteen20010 » Wed Apr 12, 2006 4:22 pm
Ok I'm sorry
Last edited by lyokowarriorteen20010 on Thu Apr 13, 2006 12:02 am, edited 2 times in total.
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by The BB of C » Wed Apr 12, 2006 4:26 pm
I'm glad you think that, now back up your oppinion. What is it about this story that you don't like so much? What can I do in the future to make sure I don't make this mistake again? One more thing, I seriously doubt that you could have read too much of that in the five and-one-half minutes it was up. How far in did you go?
by lyokowarriorteen20010 » Wed Apr 12, 2006 6:07 pm
the whole block about to be toasted part
Last edited by lyokowarriorteen20010 on Thu Apr 13, 2006 12:01 am, edited 1 time in total.
Blank slate soon to be wrote on.
by The BB of C » Wed Apr 12, 2006 8:44 pm
Okay, so you got that far. Now tell me just precicely what it was about that part it was you didn't like, and how I would avoid making that mistake again in the future.
by Mewberries151 » Wed Apr 12, 2006 10:00 pm
lyokowarriorboy2005 wrote:YOUR STORY SUCKS!!
That kind of flaming is not tolerated on this forum, lyokowarriorboy2005. I highly suggest you apologize and either delete that or edit it. Flaming is absolutely not tolerated at LF. Constructive criticism is fine, but flaming is out of the question and that is most certainly a flame. If this kind of behavior continues, lyokowarriorboy2005, there is going to be trouble.
That is all.
"Hey, make up your mind. Am I a genius or a creep?"
"You're a creepy genius."
-Odd and Jeremie; "Cruel Dilemma", Code Lyoko
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"You're a creepy genius."
-Odd and Jeremie; "Cruel Dilemma", Code Lyoko
Icon made by boxofdoomage @ LJ
by Jeremified » Wed Apr 12, 2006 10:38 pm
lyokowarriorboy2005 wrote:YOUR STORY SUCKS!!
Omg... seriously, do you HAVE to be mean like that, LWB?
I thought the story was pretty good. No other comments... it was good.
thank you all for the good memories 
by lyokowarriorteen20010 » Thu Apr 13, 2006 12:00 am
I take it all back that was so f*****g awesome!
Blank slate soon to be wrote on.
by The BB of C » Thu Apr 13, 2006 6:01 pm
Where did that come from all of a sudden? Did you read the rest of it and/or simply change your mind? Or are you just being sarcastic?
For everyone who got on Odd2's case for what he said; don't worry about it. I don't take offense to flame in stories. Just as long as they follow three conditions when they write replies like that.
1) They have had at least some experience and/or tutoring in creative writing.
2) They read at least 1/3 of the story.
3) Can back up the reason you thought it sucked with the following: What you thought was wrong with it. What you think should be changed, and how you think I can work to avoid making this mistake again in the future.
For everyone who got on Odd2's case for what he said; don't worry about it. I don't take offense to flame in stories. Just as long as they follow three conditions when they write replies like that.
1) They have had at least some experience and/or tutoring in creative writing.
2) They read at least 1/3 of the story.
3) Can back up the reason you thought it sucked with the following: What you thought was wrong with it. What you think should be changed, and how you think I can work to avoid making this mistake again in the future.
by lyokowarriorteen20010 » Thu Apr 13, 2006 8:36 pm
I gave it a second chance and what a chance it was!!
Blank slate soon to be wrote on.
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