Ulrich and the Horrible, No-Good, Very Bad Day

[Stonecreek]

Rated: PG
Genre: Humor
Summary: Ulrich is always stoic, always calm and collected. Will a day of rotten luck change that?

This is Ransomed Heart's reward for my lyrics contest. No one has guesses this week's yet, and today's the last day, so get to it! And, while you're at it, please read my other fics.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2829327/1/

[emoBillâ„¢ offline]

Hehe, that was funny...except for the cursing, Ulrich wouldn't do that, but it was funny when he cursed at Yumi and she said "Well, happy birthday to you too!"

9.5/10

[X_A_N_A offline]

i dont know about that, Aelita. i can see even Jeremy using that language in the right circumstances. heck... even YOU would use it if you thought you were under attack. I know I would for sure.

on note of the story: Very good. i give it an A+ and i know a thing or two about writing.

[Ransomed_Heart offline]

Okay, so I totally should have responded to this a long time ago ^^;

Anyway, as I said before, I love this! I was totally not expecting the ending, and I thought it was awesome all around!

[codeTONY offline]

Alexander and the Terrible, Horrible, No-Good, Very Bad Day.

Good job, BTW ^_^

[Skysong offline]

Now that was cute. One thing that especially made me giggle was the mention of getting high off paint fumes. Ah, memories...

[knifey offline]

Well, this was quite a good fic. I have to admit, I didn't see the whole "birthday thing" coming. Poor Yumi, she's going to have to explain to her parents and teachers why she didn't go to school.

It was good though, seriously.

[Skorpigeist offline]

agian a nice piece of work stonecreek. I am going to have to win one of your contests eventually.

Seal of approval

[oddlauren offline]

I give it an A+ great job.

[odd girl offline]

funny and cute ^_^ 10/10

[Skipperdee offline]

*gasp* that was great!! wowee. I love it.

[Stonecreek]

Thanks everyone for their comments. The second (and last) part of Hazed should be up later tonight, so go read part one before I post that.

Ok, OK - it will be up this weekend. Writing is going slow. Dialogue-heavy pieces tend to get rewritten a lot so they sound good.

[Demonkiller offline]

That reminds me! I have to post mine!

Yours is good. (Too lazy to rate)

[Zaeryth offline]

Awesome story. It kinda reminds me of the day I had yesterday... That was NOT a good day.

[Dreamemporer offline]

WOW!Cool sotry!i love the ending too....great job!!*claps hands*

[*Star* Gazer offline]

Cool and humoring. (Though I think I've read it...I'm not sure)

And I read that book and long time ago...*digs the spanish and English book out from shelf* Hey it's still in shape....,(I think ...They both look like who " who done it and ran")

Well good storie.

[Ari Rockefeller offline]

Aside from the frightening image of Odd naked playing a (strategically placed) set of bongos, that was a pretty good read.

[BlueEight offline]

Awesome story.

9/10

[DarkestSoul X21 offline]

10/10

[_stromboli__ offline]

Fwee! I loved it. Excelent. 10/10 and you are my hero for the day.

[Darkborn offline]

Stromboli, could you please create a Newbie Thread for yourself?