X-Mas (X=Xana obiously)

[sesshomaru offline]

Ulrich:I can't believe there taking us to new york for christmas it will be awsome
Odd:Yeah can't wait to see it
Yumi:Yeah it should be pretty cool
Jeremie:hopefully xana doesnt attack while were gone
jim:quite down we have to take role
Jim:Ok we are ready to go
*bus starts to drive to airport *
Ulrich:so odd where did you leave kiwi
Odd:Unzips backpack kiwi he say's
Ulrich:Kiwi *lick's ulrich's face Ulrich:Hi kiwi
Aelita:Maybe xana will give us a break since it's christmas
Jeremie:I doubt it.
Aelita:Jeremie don't be so negotive
Jeremie:im not being so negotive
Ulrich:Odd maybe i should tell yumi.


i will work on chapter two when i return

[Jeremie Lover offline]

1) You need to link it

2) Awesome so far

[emoBillâ„¢ offline]

-_-;; Bad grammar...need to link...

Sorry for the incredibly bad review

[MY85 offline]

You got two days to link the thing, or it gets locked.

BTW, script format ain't the best for fanfiction.