A Shooting Star! OMG AN UPDATE

[Lani offline]

Rarely do I write fics directly containing canon characters in any series.

Even more rarely do I write fics and post them to the general public.

You are witnessing a magical event in history!

Anyway, I started this today, and after listening to the... third, I think, Bleach ending like a thousand times, I couldn't help but get the image of Odd's bad performing it out of my head. And Odd's band needs way more love, so here it is! 8D

Oh, and I have to forewarn you all that I am a terrible writer >O Typos and such are 100% GUARENTEED!

<a href="http://lff.lyokofreak.net/viewstory.php?sid=17">Shooting Star, part 1</a>
<a href="http://lff.lyokofreak.net/viewstory.php?sid=17&textsize=0&chapter=2">Shooting Star, part 2</a>
<a href="http://lff.lyokofreak.net/viewstory.php?sid=17&textsize=0&chapter=3">Houki Boshi, paato san!</a>
<A href="http://lff.lyokofreak.net/viewstory.php?sid=17&textsize=0&chapter=4">Houkiboshi no yonban</a>
<A href="http://lff.lyokofreak.net/viewstory.php?sid=17&textsize=0&chapter=5">Fifth Shooting Star!!</a>

All warnings and such included in the link.

And here's the song which inspired this fic: <a href="http://media.putfile.com/Houki-Boshi54">Houki Boshi by Younha</a>

Enjoy~? :O

[rachaelkawaii offline]

It was really good!~~~
I want to know what happens next

[Shi_Min_Xi offline]

You got my attention for this fic. Can't wait for more to come

[emoBillâ„¢ offline]

It was good! I can't wait for the next chapter, the Japanese was especially good...now I can tell Odd "Iya, totemo nemui da yo" when he bugs me

[Activated Tower offline]

Nice fic, Lani. Yumi and her family speaking Japanese was a nice touch. When they sing the lyrics, is it going to be the same way or just one language?

[MY85 offline]

Yumi speaking japanese in a fic... priceless...

[YDV offline]

Very awesome, Lani! :33 (As if I haven't told you already, but hey I like singing peoples' praises, what can I say? lol)

Yeah, the idea of combining their Lyoko abilities with their human traits is VERY cool. And I love like.. the whole idea! lol (The first lyrics of the song were good too!)

[Just_Jaine offline]

That story was grate! Really amazing.


P.S. I friended your other journal, ok?

[Lani offline]

Thankies guys! ^^ I'll add the second part when I get around to it and bump the topic, yes yes...

Nice fic, Lani. Yumi and her family speaking Japanese was a nice touch. When they sing the lyrics, is it going to be the same way or just one language?

When Yumi actually performs, I'll post the English translations as appose to the Japanese lyrics, so people will know what she is saying :O

Added you back Jaine ^^!

[YDV offline]

Yay! I can just imagine Yumi singing up on stage.. that would be so awesome. OOH!! I should make a band shirt for them! xD;;

[Activated Tower offline]

Thankies guys! ^^ I'll add the second part when I get around to it and bump the topic, yes yes...

Nice fic, Lani. Yumi and her family speaking Japanese was a nice touch. When they sing the lyrics, is it going to be the same way or just one language?

When Yumi actually performs, I'll post the English translations as appose to the Japanese lyrics, so people will know what she is saying :O

Added you back Jaine ^^!

Good to know. As much as I love Japanese Anime Opening and Ending Themes (and as addictive as they are), I don't know but few words in Japanese (mostly honorifics), and I can't pronounce the ones in the Openings and Endings at all.

Yay! I can just imagine Yumi singing up on stage.. that would be so awesome. OOH!! I should make a band shirt for them! xD;;

Somehow I get the feeling you'd actually do that if given the chance. Not that that would be a bad thing.

[Lani offline]

Yo people, I added the second part xD; I have to warn you of two things:

1. I wrote that entire part on a short attention span. It sucks, no joke >O

2. I know Sissi is supposed to be getting nicer, but my Sissi muse said "I'M MEAN TODAY! >O" xD;; <s>I guess it's that time of month again...</s>

Read if you want... enjoy if you can...

[Activated Tower offline]

I thought it was good. Not as good as the last one, but still good. Keep up the good work Lani!

[Just_Jaine offline]

Yah, what he said. Your storie is still very promising though.

[Lani offline]

Thanks you two xD; Ah yes, I know, that one was kinda 'meh' xD;;

Well anyway part three is up! 8D And sorry ahead of time if any of the characters seem OOC; I wrote it all like now, and I'm pretty tired xD;

Nothing much really to say... enjoy, I guess? :O~

[YDV offline]

HOMG YAY WIN!!! xD;;;

Wow, that chapter was like.... awesome! So Odd's a catboy (literally x3), Yumi's like super gymnast woman, and Ulrich can like... super sprint? Literally? xD;

:O But what about Aelita? Doesn't she get supercool powers too? ...Eh. Oh well.

This is so cool! xD; I'm like geekin' out here.

Somehow I get the feeling you'd actually do that if given the chance. Not that that would be a bad thing.

...Actually yes. Yes I would. Anybody got any design ideas?

Well uh... there's your review, Lani! Sorta! ^^ NOW MAY I PLEASE GO TO BED?!?!?

[Activated Tower offline]

It does NOT suck worse than the last one. Like YD said, it was awesome. Although for some reason I'm not so sure Ulrich's program works because he asked Jeremie if he was sure he didn't mess it up somewhere. But hopefully I'm just thinking about it more than I should.

:O But what about Aelita? Doesn't she get supercool powers too? ...Eh. Oh well.

The only thing she could do is change the environment. Wait, she should be able to do that. She could trap XANA in the ground or something.

[Shi_Min_Xi offline]

Yay! Finally the gang gets their powers outside of Lyoko! Yay!!!

Noooo!!!!Cliffhanger....Evil!!!!! You better make them get through the competition...Or else! (I'm going to go to where you live and say HOW DARE YOU MAKE THEM LOSE!!! ) *whistles innocently* It's not bad. It's pretty good. I like it. Continue!

[rachaelkawaii offline]

yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

[Lani offline]

Hay ... I updated. xD;

This part's kinda boring... just basically them going over the judges' sheets and stuff.

AND! I kinda need help and suggestions as to what XANA's attack is gonna be... if you'd like to help then like... drop me a line or something. 'Cause I'll give you the scenario where it's supposed to happen and...yeah. xD;

AND! I just remembered that Yumi's from Kyoto (want reference? Watch The Chips are Down), and I had her speaking standard Japanese in the first chapter! D: Only her father should be speaking standard Japanese... Yumi, her mother, and Hiroki should be speaking in Kansai dialect (like Osaka from Azumanga Daioh)... Okay I'm done xD;

Tanoshimu!

[YDV offline]

Yay omg!! xD;; you win, Lani. Like... seriously.

Jim has been like, really grouchy lately.... and Sissi came back from her vacation? xD;; I was like o___o um where did she come from...?

Oh yeah, and I just love it when Jeremie replies hotly xDD

The judges' responses are good! :O I didn't even get half of what they were saying, so that must mean it's all like.. smart. xD;

<s>Your keyboardist is really hot! ♥ </s> << What was that? xD;;

Arg... sorry I couldn't give a better review. But I'm like high off of that corn-ed beef I've been stealing out of the fridge for the like past hour xD

[Activated Tower offline]

It wasn't that boring. I don't know what a glisando is, though, but it sounds like it might be of some use to Ulrich. And I hope they do go to Japan, if only for Jim, since he seems to want Odd to leave.

[lyokowarriorteen20010 offline]

I like it update soon

[Just_Jaine offline]

Hey look over there *points* a monky. *steals next chapter*

These last two chapters were so great. I can't wait to read more.

[Lani offline]

HAY GUYS. How long has it been? Like, forever, I bet.

SO. I put up the fifth chapter! Um... I don't remember the details, so I apologize if it turns out crappy 8D

Anyway, enjoy!!