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Winterfall

Postby YDV » Mon Apr 17, 2006 4:40 pm

Here is mah story! Finally! :O

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2897760/1/

Summary:

After three months of quiet once he escaped from the supercomputer, XANA strikes again, but this time he has a new method of attack. And he's going global. As the battle grows more urgent, the team grows as well... but what will happen when Winter falls?

Yes... I got the idea for this one day when I had one of those "wouldn't it be cool if....?" moments. Read and comment/review, please! Oh, and wouldya tell me if it's a little.. cliche? Because that's been bothering me.
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Postby Lani » Mon Apr 17, 2006 5:16 pm

HOLY CRAP WOMAN. Where did you learn to write? Honestly xD; We could be a manga team. Deedee could come up with the concept, you write the storyboard and I could draw. See! Foolproof plan.
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Postby YDV » Mon Apr 17, 2006 5:21 pm

OMGYES!! Muahaha! We could do that and then I wouldn't have to <s>use all of Deedee's money</s> beg on the streets! xD;

Honestly I have no idea where I learned to write. I suppose in school. But for some reason I just go "lalala! 8D" into a keyboard and I get 100's on essays. o____o
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Postby *Star* Gazer » Mon Apr 17, 2006 9:15 pm

Cool. My user name on their is Taliae

I love it! Man I wish I was that good with words. But some people are just born story tellers. :D

Continue (again.)
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Postby Shi_Min_Xi » Tue Apr 18, 2006 10:21 pm

Yay! Manga team! That be fun...:D Anyways....I really like your story. Well written :D Yea...I'm about to leave a comment on it. I'm Haikarion Niwakan :D
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Postby Activated Tower » Wed Apr 19, 2006 11:54 am

Wow. That story is awesome; I'm practically speachless. Like everyone else has said, it's very well written. I didn't think it was clichéd at all.
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Postby lyokowarriorteen20010 » Wed Apr 19, 2006 12:27 pm

I like your story. Ok then I'm inviting every one to my fanfiction/fanart contest to judge or join my PM me for the deatails the link is in my sig!
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Postby YDV » Wed Apr 19, 2006 3:15 pm

*cough* I don't think it's very nice to advertise in somebody else's thread.... :whatever:

Anyways. Thanks, you guys! ^-^ Yeah, I've started chapter two already but I haven't had time to write any lately. >>;
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Postby lyokowarriorteen20010 » Wed Apr 19, 2006 5:34 pm

Ok me sorry
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Postby Just_Jaine » Wed Apr 19, 2006 7:32 pm

It was just, wow! Hum I've read some of your othere stories before and there all great. Keep on writing.
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Postby Chiquita » Sat Apr 22, 2006 9:44 pm

I'm waiting!
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Postby Jeremified » Wed Apr 26, 2006 11:15 pm

I just love posting things like this. Sorry to you mods if it qualifies as spam.

Congrats to YDV for grabbing the 2500th topic!!! :D
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Postby mooshie » Wed Apr 26, 2006 11:43 pm

wow great story, great plot, great writing, great
well it seems as if everyone wants sissi to be part of the group, so who am I to argue, but anyways, I look forward to how you depicst XANA attacking
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Postby YDV » Wed May 17, 2006 10:03 pm

Oh yeah xD;; Um, Chapter Two is up!! *is shot for not announcing this earlier*

Thanks bunches you guys. ^^
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Postby Activated Tower » Thu May 18, 2006 5:24 pm

Wow. Just wow. If only this could be Season 3 instead of whatever Moonscoop's doing. I think this will probably end up being alot better. Too bad it'll never happen.

Anyway; I thought it was written just as well as, if not better, than the last chapter (but maybe it just seems that way to me because I just loved the atmosphere of the whole thing. I honestly don't think I could be patient for very long if all the other chapters are like that.).
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