"Jeremie sends Odd, Aelita, Ulrich, and Yumi back to June 6, 1994 to delete XANA before he can ever be a problem. However, only a badly hurt Odd comes back, begging to be sent back so he can save his friends."
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2905011/1/
Please do tell me what you think, even if you don't like it. A well thought out negative review is worth a lot more to me than polite silence.
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Mission to the Past
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Mission to the Past
by Grand_Commander13 » Fri Apr 21, 2006 7:17 pm
by Pika53 » Fri Apr 28, 2006 12:24 pm
This was an interesting story to read and I really enjoyed it. If it's not much trouble, would you mind reviewing
my own story and letting me know what you think? It's still a work in progress, but every review helps.
my own story and letting me know what you think? It's still a work in progress, but every review helps.
{From A Fine Mess}
Odd: (admiring himself) "I have a dynamite body! Better than yours anyway."
Odd: (admiring himself) "I have a dynamite body! Better than yours anyway."
by Skysong » Sun Apr 30, 2006 2:57 pm
You get huge props for the originality of this. I liked it.
Mistress of madness and all that jazz. FFN account DA account
Panel from Wild Child 'cause the nosekiss was getting too weird.
Panel from Wild Child 'cause the nosekiss was getting too weird.
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