I was reading ff today randomly and I came across this. I was ... like, astounded at how OOC it was.
I mean sure, the writing was very well done, but this author obviously doesn't watch CL very much. *sighs impatiently*
Okay, since when is Ulrich that full of lust? Yumi and he have a respectful relationship, not a sexual one. Plus, the author makes Yumi sound like some kind of stupid bimbo, which she is TOTALLY not. Ulrich would never think the things he did in that fic, he's too shy. I'm almost offended at his thoughts of her because of how all he was thinking about was her appearance. (How her 'full hips swing when she walks'? The 'low-cut top' incedent? My god, what's that? Soft-core porn?)
