This is rated PG.
Jeremie scanned the screen of his computer,looking for any sign of errors. Suddenly, a red light started flashing on the screen. "X.A.N.A.`s atacking!" He said to himself. He dialed sent a text message to Ulrich,Yumi,Aelita,and Odd. It read: Code X.A.N.A. . Each member saw the text message and instantly ran to the factory. They all went up the elevator to where Jeremy was sitting. "You guys know what to do." Jeremie said. "Alright. Let`s go!" Yumi said. Each one of them went into a virtualization chamber. "Transfer Ulrich. Transfer Odd. Transfer Yumi. Transfer Aelita." Jeremie said. Yumi,Odd, Ulrich, and Aelita felt wind rush through their hair inside the chamber. "Scanner Ulrich. Scanner Odd. Scanner Yumi. Scanner Aelita." Jeremie said. "Virtualization!" Odd,Yumi, Ulrich,and Aelita each were in sector 5. "Okay,you guys. This is were X.A.N.A. should be atacking." Jeremie said on speaker. "Oh. You guys have company." "No problem. Ulrich said. Ulrich took out his swords. "Okay. Ulrich,Odd. You guys fight the monsters. Yumi,Aelita. Head for the tower." Jeremie said. "But Jeremie,were is the tower?" Aelita asked.
Okay,that`s were I`ll stop for now. What do u think?