I just posted this on fanfiction.net. I would appreciate it if someone would look over at it, and give me a little constructive criticism. I'm not looking for praise, nor am I looking for flames, I just want some opinions.
This Feeling (crummy title, I know, but I couldn't come up with anything better.
Rating:T
Pairing:U/Y,
http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/live_preview.php?storyid=3999042&chapter=1