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Hotel Lyoko

by Alex » Sat Oct 08, 2005 9:20 pm

And no, it's not based on the thread in the Games forum. Songfic to "Hotel California."

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2605744/1/

R&R, or comment here.

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by SamBlob » Sun Oct 09, 2005 7:30 am

Comment #1: Mistake in the lyrics: should read "She got the Mercedes bends."

My source? The album cover. I have it here at home.

Comment #2: No coherent story. It jumps all around.

Comment #3: Thin. I seem to be reading a rash of thin, underdeveloped songfics lately. The story seems to be feeding from the song instead of moving with the song.

Overall: It doesn't do justice either to Code Lyoko or to Hotel California.

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