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Never Give Up and Behind Closed Hearts

Postby Trillinka » Sat Apr 30, 2005 5:57 pm

Never Give Up
Complete! In some quiet time the team decides to try out Jeremy's new program, but before they can, X.A.N.A. attacks! This time, X.A.N.A. isn't out to kill quickly, he's out to torture too . Can our heroes find a way to stop X.A.N.A.? YxU JxA
Code Lyoko - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Action/Adventure - Chapters: 19 - Words: 7454 - Published: 6-21-04

Behind Closed Hearts
Work in progress. Yumi is dating Theo, and things aren't as they should be. Ulrich knows something's wrong, but will he find out before it's too late? Contains some violence, slight profanity, and mature subject matter.
Code Lyoko - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Action/Adventure - Chapters: 46 - Words: 50533 - Updated: 4-20-05 - Published: 7-10-04


These are my two stories, and this is the place to talk about them or ask me questions or suggest stuff. Anything goes!

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Postby Yizzy » Sat Apr 30, 2005 6:40 pm

I'll read them they sound intresting!
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Postby Trillinka » Sat Apr 30, 2005 7:32 pm

Awesome! Let me know what you think, k?
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Postby Star Way » Sat Apr 30, 2005 10:43 pm

YIS, you need to read Behind Closed Hearts... it rocks.
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Postby Stephen (x1) » Sun May 01, 2005 3:43 am

I might have read it...I'll go check.
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Postby Star Way » Sun May 01, 2005 2:42 pm

Most people have read her BCH story... she's got like 700 reviews for it or something.
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Postby Little Vili » Sun May 01, 2005 3:24 pm

BCH is good, even though eventually its gets a bit off track (but it shows later that it has its reasons). Tril is a very very good author. Im also going to read her other fic soon as well. ;)
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Postby Yizzy » Sun May 01, 2005 4:43 pm

There both pretty good
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Postby Trillinka » Sun May 01, 2005 5:40 pm

I'm glad you guys like them so far! I'm working on the next chapter and have it partway typed. I'm combining a lot of smaller chapters since everyone seems to like them longer. Right now I"m a bit stressed about Prom and my date saying he couldn't come. It's 1 week to Prom and I don't have a date. Any takers? :P


Since I do have a pic of me posted online, I figured I'd let you see the brains behind the stories. I'm a high school senior, just in case any of you are wondering. It's me!
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Postby Yizzy » Mon May 02, 2005 12:47 am

Great! :)
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Postby Little Vili » Mon May 02, 2005 5:37 am

Tril wrote:Right now I"m a bit stressed about Prom and my date saying he couldn't come. It's 1 week to Prom and I don't have a date. Any takers?


Oooo, me!!! :D ...jk, im too young for you (*thinks* if only I was 3 years older)....lol.
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Postby Trillinka » Mon May 02, 2005 12:56 pm

Lol, thanks for the kind of offer, Vili. This morning I asked a sophomore and he said yes so I now have a date! And a million things to prepare before Prom! I need to get they flowers, pay for the pictures, plan supper, get a garter, plan times to pick him up (I'm gonna drive in my big poofy dress!), and all that other stuff! It's quite exciting! :D
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Postby Little Vili » Mon May 02, 2005 3:12 pm

:thumbs up: thats cool that you found someone. I hope you have a good time (without me ;__; ...jk)
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Postby Trillinka » Mon May 02, 2005 6:47 pm

Thanks, Vili. I'd take you if I could. I'd take everyone!!! But I don't think the school would like that :P
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Postby Little Vili » Tue May 03, 2005 5:26 am

lol thanks :music: . That would be kinda funny to see us all walk in.
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Postby Trillinka » Tue May 03, 2005 2:39 pm

Mean nasty principal guy: What are all these kids doing here?
Me: They're my dates.
Principal: Dates?
Me: Yeah, this is Vili (goes on to list a whole slew of people).
Principal: Where did you find them all?!
Me: Oh, just around. Offer up Prom and you wouldn't believe how many people will follow you!
Principal: Did they all pay for tickets?
Me: Sure! Even though you do charge too much for them. And don't even ask about dinner.... I'll be paying till I'm 40!
Principal: You took them out to supper?!
Me: Yeah, but next time I'm taking them all to a buffet!!
Principal: Well, I guess you can go in. *mutters to himself* bunch of hoodlums.
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Postby Little Vili » Tue May 03, 2005 3:15 pm

:rofl2: :lol: :rofl: :no!: rofl
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Postby Star Way » Tue May 03, 2005 4:19 pm

LOL, nice.

Me: *burps* It was good dinner, too.
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Postby MY85 » Tue May 03, 2005 10:22 pm

Trillinka wrote:Principal: You took them out to supper?!
Me: Yeah, but next time I'm taking them all to a buffet!!


Hahaha!! Thanks for the buffet offer anyways... now you gave me an idea for posting something. But I'll do it if you allow me....
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Postby Trillinka » Wed May 04, 2005 12:50 pm

Glad to see I could make some of you laugh. See what extra time and a full stomach can do??

Go right ahead and post it, I'm curious to see what you've come up with.
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Postby Little Vili » Wed May 04, 2005 4:13 pm

too bad my stomach's empty.
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Postby Trillinka » Wed May 04, 2005 6:42 pm

Mine is now too ;__;
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Postby MY85 » Wed May 04, 2005 8:46 pm

Trillinka wrote:Go right ahead and post it, I'm curious to see what you've come up with.


I posted the thing I came up with at Tv Tome's CL Thread Things They Would Never Say/Do Part 2... go check it...
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Postby Little Vili » Wed May 04, 2005 9:57 pm

Trillinka wrote:Mine is now too ;__;


I had steak and pizza while playing Star Ocean 3.
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Postby Trillinka » Thu May 05, 2005 5:03 pm

I just ate a big bowl of cheetos so I'm nice and full *burps*. It won't be enough to last me through work so I'm going to hunt up something else... Probably peanut butter sandwich like usual. :whatever:
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