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Starship Phoenix (my manga)

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Starship Phoenix (my manga)

Postby YDV » Wed Oct 26, 2005 6:08 pm

Err.. I have no IDEA where to post this. But oh well. Here goes..

Starship Phoenix

The year is 300x. Earth has not only discovered the existence of "aliens", but it is part of a universe-wide democratic order called the Interplanetary Convention. As a result of this, it has become much more space-faring-- in fact, most Earthlings have left the planet before they're 10 years old.

The story follows the adventures of a ragtag teenage "crew" of a mysterious battlecruiser called the Phoenix, traversing the galaxy as a result of a terrible incident.

Fifteen-year-old Michiko Takahashi is a fiesty fighter girl who is slightly tomboyish, but don't tell her that to her face-- she'll knock you out. Zyte is the "dark" one of the group. He doesn't talk much about himself, but his skills with the Bo staff more than make up for it.

Then there's the identical twins, Akio and Alpha. Akio is the brains behind the group-- he pilots the Phoenix and usually has an answer for everything. Since sometimes his plans and inventions tend to backfire, he's gotten the nickname of "the smartest idiot in the Galaxy." Alpha, with bright pink spiky hair, is the laid-back "lady's man". He's also a real sharp shooter when it comes to rail guns and laser pistols.

Enter Diamond-- the Golden Child. She's the daughter of the prestigious Veda family, owners of Veda Enterprises: the best in top-of-the line.. well, anything. And she is also endowed with superhuman abilities from a strange jewel that hangs around her neck.

Last, but certainly not least, is the street-smart Kasai. He's not only Zyte's childhood friend, but the subject of Diamond's undying affections. The Afro-Lunian born on the Moon, which is home to Earth's Government City, also has the power over flames.

The Story

Here's a few random pages/comics that I started and never finished.. I doubt you'll understand them though.

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Idolly By pg 1

Idolly By pg 2

^^ That one's kinda bad now that I look at it again. I'll scan some pics of my characters and put them up too.

I hope you guys like it!! :D
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Postby Little Vili » Wed Oct 26, 2005 8:40 pm

Did you by any chance get the name from the thrid ratchet and clank game?
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Postby YDV » Thu Oct 27, 2005 3:23 pm

Little Vili wrote:Did you by any chance get the name from the thrid ratchet and clank game?


Um.. no. There was a third one?

It's a starship. It's called The Phoenix. Figure it out.
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Postby YDV » Sat Oct 29, 2005 11:27 am

Er.. *bump*

Why is it that no one ever reads this story? ;__;

*notices someone actually voted*

Oh, great. Well. I'm gonna go take my work elsewhere. ::sniff::
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Postby YDV » Thu Nov 03, 2005 5:23 pm

La la la *BUMP* dee-ay, la la la *BUMP* dee-ayy...
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Postby Star Way » Thu Nov 03, 2005 5:39 pm

Hun, I can completely sympathize with you when I see that this thread hasn't been posted on much, but you repeatedly trying to bring it to people's attention by posting on it over and over is making it spammy. Locking. Sorry...
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