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Dewdrops

Postby YDV » Sat Jan 28, 2006 2:57 pm

Alright! I've got a new story on FictionPress-- Dewdrops (yes Chapter 1 is FINALLY done..)

Special LF-exclusive Summary...

High school can be tough. Especially when you have to deal with elemental powers, working for a government agency that isn't supposed to exist, and fighting ancient evil. You know-- same old, same old.

All Kaitlin ever wanted to do was be the best archaeologist the world's ever seen, having been inspired by her parents from a young age. So why did an artifact at a museum be the thing to change her life, along with her best friend, Clara's? And why is it that their parents were the very ones who discovered that artifact, years ago?

Brad didn't even want to go on the field trip. After he blacked out while being arrested in the very same museum for something done with completely good intentions, he now has to struggle with something else brought upon him-- his new abilities.

Gabriel wanted to make more friends. Brad was great, but who can deal with having only one person to talk to? When Merric came along, he thought he was the perfect solution-- only once they got to the museum, things started to get weirder and weirder...

Dew is water that condenses on cool surfaces, overnight. Rain is a form of percipitation, brought on by clouds. So dewdrops that fall from the sky are the same thing. Right?

Dewdrops

...Yeah. Don't ask me about the whole "dewdrops vs. rain" thing. idk. But anyways, pleaseeee read it and tell me what you think? Cuz nobody ever reviews my stuff so I don't know if it's good or not and that's like torture, man. :(

I don't know why exactly it's in "Supernatural," either. I just couldn't think of anything else.
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Postby Star Way » Sat Jan 28, 2006 7:40 pm

Since this isn't fanfic, I'm going to move this to GD. Sorry. ;)

Your story sounds like it's cool, by the way. Interesting summary.
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Postby Just_Jaine » Sat Jan 28, 2006 9:26 pm

I loved your story! *_* I cant wait to read more.
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Postby DarkestSoul X21 » Sat Jan 28, 2006 9:38 pm

I really like it :D
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Postby YDV » Sun Jan 29, 2006 12:51 am

Thanks! :D I've got like 70-80% of Chapter Two down in my notebook.. I just need to type it up.

Oh, Erynn-- It's okay. I wasn't sure where to put it anyway. ^^;
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Postby Shi_Min_Xi » Sun Jan 29, 2006 1:10 am

Pretty interesting story there...Can't wait to read the rest.
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Postby YDV » Tue Jan 31, 2006 9:28 pm

Alright, finally got Chapter 2 up!

Chapter Two

I hope you enjoy it. I've spent the past... what? Week and a half? Writing it up in my notebook. I havee *flips pages* 21 pages. People think I'm obsessed with some essay assignment since I'm always writing in it ^-^;

Now, I think I will take a break. And maybe update my other 50,000 stories I have up.
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Postby Just_Jaine » Tue Jan 31, 2006 10:40 pm

Cool I like what you added! I dont think the link to the second chapter works. Again I cant wait for more!
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Postby YDV » Tue Jan 31, 2006 10:54 pm

Thanks! I fixed the link.
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Postby Rycr » Wed Feb 08, 2006 3:17 am

Hey! This is pretty good! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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