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well, what do you think

Great! can't wait for it to come out!
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Eh, well er.. it's not that it's bad, it's just that it isn't good
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my future manga

Postby matsumo itsu » Thu Feb 12, 2009 4:49 pm

Hey i just wanted to tell everyone my thoughts for my future manga, sorry for any grammar mistakes.

It’s about a furry samurai(yes the samurai will be part human, part animal not sure which animal, thinking fox but that’d fall kind of close to naruto), and it starts with the main character waking up to the smell off smoke, finds out his house is on fire, and his dad manages to get in his room, he manages to get his son out, but dies in the process from getting caught in some flames, the people who set the entire house and all the people around where he lives on fire, are some rouge samurai’s, the main character decides to become a samurai to try to find the people who killed everyone he knew and loved, and it continues 10 years in the future when he is a samurai he finds a sword from a opponent he kills later in the manga, and it turns out to be a magic sword, one which can only be used if someone near to him is at risk of death from a enemy, and when that is that happens it catches on fire. But later in the manga something happens where he is to afraid to use the flame sword and he will only use his regular sword, even though his own life is at risk.

Begin discussing ideas. critiques welcome.

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Postby Lyoko Wario » Thu Feb 19, 2009 12:44 pm

If you don't mind me saying, it's a bit trite, story-wise...

Be more like me. I've got a prose novel in the works called The Weekly Platypus.
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Postby matsumo itsu » Thu Feb 19, 2009 4:23 pm

Well of i would of gave it a proper title, unfortunately i haven't came up with one, and thank you for being more appropriate then the last forum i posted it on, immature people. Don't you love em. well okay back on topic. I'm actually working on a title now for the manga, and i'm hoping to have it be big one day. Also i'm hoping to begin work on the first one during my final year of highschool, although, only 5 copies will be made. and hopefully the full thing will be highly liked.

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