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by lyokowarriorteen20010 » Mon Apr 03, 2006 3:29 am
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by Jeremified » Mon Apr 03, 2006 6:46 pm
(Edit: never mind, misinterpreted title. 
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thank you all for the good memories 
by Mewberries151 » Mon Apr 03, 2006 9:43 pm
Hmmm...the link does not seem to be working. It leads to a "Page Not Found" site. I hope this can be fixed... 
"Hey, make up your mind. Am I a genius or a creep?"
"You're a creepy genius."
-Odd and Jeremie; "Cruel Dilemma", Code Lyoko
Icon made by boxofdoomage @ LJ
"You're a creepy genius."
-Odd and Jeremie; "Cruel Dilemma", Code Lyoko
Icon made by boxofdoomage @ LJ
by Stonecreek » Mon Apr 03, 2006 10:02 pm
Mewberries151 wrote:Hmmm...the link does not seem to be working. It leads to a "Page Not Found" site. I hope this can be fixed...
In his (her? I dunno) defense, it was working around 10:45 am. The site looked good, at least.
YDV wrote:Well you see, the amount of time we didn't normally hang around BKO is kind of like potential energy, and then when we all finally came back at the same time it's like letting loose a catapult. 8D
It's all very scientifical. |D
Ah, memories...
http://z10.invisionfree.com/Anime_and_M ... hp?act=idx
by Mewberries151 » Mon Apr 03, 2006 10:07 pm
Was it a website link or a link to his fanfiction though? If it was a website link it should be in Tech Discussion not Fanfiction... ^^
"Hey, make up your mind. Am I a genius or a creep?"
"You're a creepy genius."
-Odd and Jeremie; "Cruel Dilemma", Code Lyoko
Icon made by boxofdoomage @ LJ
"You're a creepy genius."
-Odd and Jeremie; "Cruel Dilemma", Code Lyoko
Icon made by boxofdoomage @ LJ
by Stonecreek » Mon Apr 03, 2006 10:10 pm
Mewberries151 wrote:Was it a website link or a link to his fanfiction though? If it was a website link it should be in Tech Discussion not Fanfiction... ^^
This author is the one whose mom doesn't let them post at fanfiction.net, so this site was created to host the fanfiction. That was all that was on it when I saw it.
YDV wrote:Well you see, the amount of time we didn't normally hang around BKO is kind of like potential energy, and then when we all finally came back at the same time it's like letting loose a catapult. 8D
It's all very scientifical. |D
Ah, memories...
http://z10.invisionfree.com/Anime_and_M ... hp?act=idx
by lyokowarriorteen20010 » Tue Apr 04, 2006 6:55 pm
thanks and I'm a boy I don't get it it was ok before 
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by lyokowarriorteen20010 » Tue Apr 04, 2006 7:45 pm
Well I sorta updated it and here it is Btw could someone give me some ideas? I have a hugh writers block
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by darktemplar » Wed Apr 05, 2006 8:58 am
Nunchakus, not nunchucks.
Chapter 1 looked first fun, but when I readed 2nd and 3rd part of that chapter, I stopped considering it fun. You kicked Chapter 2.. too much presenting them.. Chapter 3 was no better, as was Chapter 4... I think you could throw them away without any damage to plot.. And letting them use powers in Academy.. Couldn't they just use hands to do it? Reconsider it..
I think you are able to make better story... good luck!
Chapter 1 looked first fun, but when I readed 2nd and 3rd part of that chapter, I stopped considering it fun. You kicked Chapter 2.. too much presenting them.. Chapter 3 was no better, as was Chapter 4... I think you could throw them away without any damage to plot.. And letting them use powers in Academy.. Couldn't they just use hands to do it? Reconsider it..
I think you are able to make better story... good luck!
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by lyokowarriorteen20010 » Wed Apr 05, 2006 5:56 pm
Any more sugestion like maybe an example??
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by Rycr » Wed Apr 12, 2006 5:57 pm
No offense, but that was probably the most confusing thing I've ever read. I have no idea what's going on, and the plot seems really disjointed.
From what I can understand, the overall plot seems uncannily like my own story...
By the way, is there any reason why you aren't allowed on fanfiction.net?
From what I can understand, the overall plot seems uncannily like my own story...
By the way, is there any reason why you aren't allowed on fanfiction.net?
by lyokowarriorteen20010 » Wed Apr 12, 2006 8:15 pm
One of the guys username is mr evil and for you information I completly came up with it last year and I have known about yours 3 moths ago. Also I thinking of stopping that to do a prequel BTW could you help me out a little I'm kinda new to this What do you mean disjointed
BTW please hurry up with the next chapter of living up to a legend!
Now thats not right I have had almost two hundred views and only 12 reviews!
BTW please hurry up with the next chapter of living up to a legend!
Now thats not right I have had almost two hundred views and only 12 reviews!
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by The BB of C » Sat Apr 15, 2006 9:34 am
The whole 6 chapters were really predictable and repeated themselves up to 3 times in the same chapter. There didn't seem to be any specific plot. The characters were not very diverse. There was not really a lot of detail. I had no idea what was going on half of the time or even why the kids had powers.
Will you be updating that story at all?
Will you be updating that story at all?
by lyokowarriorteen20010 » Sat Apr 15, 2006 2:11 pm
I think I'm going to do a prequel about how the kids did.
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by pilot4him2005 » Sat Apr 15, 2006 9:03 pm
Your story is excellent superb awesome I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
by The BB of C » Sun Apr 16, 2006 1:23 pm
lyokowarriorboy2005 wrote:I think I'm going to do a prequel about how the kids did.
That might be a good idea. But note (if you're looking to get better at writing), you may want to make your characters a little more diverse, mix up the plot, and explain all of this stuff in the beginning.
There is a way to do what you did with this story and make it good, but it's really hard to do. I hesitate to do it ever because it's that risky to completely ruin a story from the beginning to the end.
by lyokowarriorteen20010 » Sun Apr 16, 2006 1:58 pm
Ok then its setteled (sp?) I'll pm starway to lock this and start my new story.
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by lyokowarriorteen20010 » Tue May 02, 2006 6:12 pm
Ok instead of doing that I'll be lazy and give you a quick outline on how they did.
The scanners messed up when their parents got devirtulized and to Jerimie nothing seemed wrong until he went to lyoko. and he got his powers so long story short they transfered thier elemnt powers to their kids and Jerimie created Janice and George to protect lyoko. Now you know what happend!
The scanners messed up when their parents got devirtulized and to Jerimie nothing seemed wrong until he went to lyoko. and he got his powers so long story short they transfered thier elemnt powers to their kids and Jerimie created Janice and George to protect lyoko. Now you know what happend!
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by lyokowarriorteen20010 » Thu Jun 08, 2006 11:43 am
Hey almost three hundred views and only twenty some replies thats is mean!!
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by darktemplar » Wed Jun 21, 2006 5:18 am
Did you stop writing? Or is the Chapter 6 big big?
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by lyokowarriorteen20010 » Wed Jun 21, 2006 3:27 pm
Chapter six. Well lets say that it took four pages on note pad.. Here is a preview.
Jake collapsed as the force field around the girls went down.
Enjoy! I hope to have it the chapter completed within this month..
Jake collapsed as the force field around the girls went down.
Enjoy! I hope to have it the chapter completed within this month..
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by darktemplar » Fri Jun 23, 2006 3:01 am
THIS MONTH! Dude, so it's like super-hiper-ultra-long??
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