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"Hey, Julio, what time is it," the girl whispers.
"You're failing this class too," whispered Julio.
"So," said the girl.
"Angela," said the teacher.
She sits up straight, "I'm up!"
"Angela," the teacher says one more time.
"Yeah, dude, I mean, ," said Angela.
"Are you taking notes," asked .
Angela looks down at her paper and sees her doodles, "Yes sir."
"Okay, when did George Washington die," asked .
"Uh...at the...end of his life," Angela says nervously.
The class bursts out in laughter. The bell rings.
tells the class as they leave, "Study your notes. There's going to be a quiz tomorrow."
Julio giggles.
The two catch up with her.
"Yeah. asked Angela when did George Washington die and she said-," Julio says while laughing.
"I said, shut it," said Angela.
"I was working on Lyoko," said Patricia.
"That virtual world," asked Julio
"Yes," said Patricia.
"Dude, as much as I love computers and Mecha'd Futuristic Turbo-ey Animes. There are no such thing as virtual worlds," said Angela.
"You like futuristic Anime," Julio and Patricia asks Angela.
"Yeah, didn't you see the posters and toys in my room? Besides all that Bleach and FMA stuff I have alot of Gundam, Eureka Seven and Zoids," Angela tells the two.
"I wouldn't either. And the last time we went in there. I found a half eaten pork-chop," Julio says disgusted.
"Actually it was a 2 month old half eaten beef rib cooked medium well," corrected Angela.
Julio and Patricia walk away disgusted.
Angela catches up with them, "Oh, come on guys! I threw it away already! I was saving it for Arturo when he comes back so he can eat it!"
A little while later. The three are outside spending their lunchtime.
"That's what you think," Patricia tells the two.
Sirens and cars crashing are heard.
"What the hell was that," asked Julio.
"Angela, it's not a good time to joke around. We have to get out of here," Patricia warns to the two.
"To the locker room," Angela suggests.
"There's a boy in the locker room," a girl yells.
"I'm gonna go to my locker and get my laptop," Patricia tells the two.
"Everybody, stay down," said one of the teachers.
"Holy crap," said Angela.
"Julio, Angela, come over here," said Patricia.
Julio and Angela walk around the other frightened girls. They sit down on the bench.
"What's wrong," asked Angela.
"You said you didn't believe that there was a virtual world," said Patricia, "this is the only proof I need to show you two it exists."
"Is that, Lyoko," asked Angela.
"So how does that pertain to this event of our lives ending in about an hour," asked Angela.
"See that symbol? That symbol is for a virus called XANA. That's the thing that wants to destroy the world," explained Patricia.
"Okay. So how do you expect us to destroy this thing. Hello? We're 12, we're not cops or psycho geniuses ," asked Angela.
"Wait at the Warehousing Area," asked Angela.
"What," Julio and Patricia ask.
"So dude, the Warehousing Area," asked Angela.
"Cool," said Angela as she walks away.
"Then don't be a moron," exclaimed Julio and Patricia
Gunshots are heard.
"Run," yelled Angela.
The three run to the warehouse and escape the gunfire and the cops.
They make it in one piece.
Inside are computers and technology beyond your wildest dreams.
"Julio, I think our lives just took a turn for the worst," said Angela.
"Oww, that hurt," complained Angela as she gets up.
"Where are we," asked Julio.
"Holy crap! Were on Lyoko," exclaimed Julio and Angela.
"Atmosphere here is different. It's not like the real world," said Angela, "plus I just said real world."
She takes out a katana from its sheath and swings it around.
"What's with the weapons," asked Angela.
"It's like a video game," said Julio
"Lyoko isn't just some video game, where you can just restart the game if you fail a mission. If you fail a mission here, you let the world down," Patricia tells
"What do you mean," asked Angela.
"Lyoko and Earth are connected. When XANA launches an attack. It can reach Earth. We have to deactivate the towers he activates in order to stop him," Patricia explained the two.
"So if we fail a mission here, XANA's one step closer to destroying the Earth," asked Julio.
A monster comes out of nowhere.
"What is that," exclaimed Julio
"It's called a Blok," said Patricia, "it's our enemy."
"Well if it's our enemy, why the hell are we just standing here," said Angela.
The three dodge them.
"So where is this activated tower," asked Julio
"I know where it is. Just follow my lead," said Patricia.
Angela takes out her katana and slices the Blok, destroying it.
Another monster appears.
"Don't attack when it charges up for it's laser. That thing is an automatic devirtualization if you're hit," Patricia tells her.
Angela is ready to attack, "Right."
"Not too shabby," said Angela, "but say kahmusta to my little friend!"
Meanwhile, Julio and Patricia make it to the towers location.
"Just sit down and wait. I'm start a 'Return to the Past'," she tells him.
"Wait, were going back in time," he asks.
Patricia walks inside the tower and opens the monitor. She types in the code, "Lyoko."
"Did we just go back in freakin time," asked Angela.
"Did we," asked Julio.
"I can't believe Lyoko is real," exclaimed Angela, "can't wait to go back. The excitement. The fighting. Y'know the, Pew, Pew, Pew! Sinck, Sinck, Sinck! "
"Hey, Patty, you obviously have no imagination. Isn't this your first Lyoko trip or did you ready go," asked Angela.
"Sort of," said Patricia.
"XANA may be a demonic artificial intelligence trying to take over the world, but c'mon dude, from this day forward, we're super heroes now," said Angela.
"And the heroes always win," added Julio.
Aelita wrote:Ahahahaha, I used to hate reviews that did that when I was a young writer, but now I'm a teenager and I'm like 'Y'know what? It helps!' I use correct grammar in all my sentences now. I'm the girl who will write her texts in all correct grammar and punctuation...I'm kinda OCD about it xP
If you need a beta reader, then I'm here ^_^
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