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Code: Lyoko - The Future is Now

Postby Taelia » Wed Nov 23, 2005 8:27 pm

http://s12.invisionfree.com/The_Terra_Shrine/index.php?showtopic=360

Genre: Action, Adventure, and a little Romance

Rating:G at first, then it'll change soon enough.
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Postby MY85 » Wed Nov 23, 2005 8:30 pm

Nice, but:

1) Link your story to ff.net or somewhere else. If not, it gets locked in two days.

2) Put the rating on your fic, and genre as well.
Lani wrote:Eh, in the end, people (real or cartoon) are naked and having a good time. What's wrong with that?
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Postby Odd22 » Wed Nov 23, 2005 8:33 pm

Rodri give her more time, she might be new at this.
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Postby Blueyedblonde » Wed Nov 23, 2005 8:44 pm

She is new at this, But I'll help her out. ;)

Thanks for sticking up for her, Odd22! :D
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Postby Odd22 » Wed Nov 23, 2005 9:03 pm

No proble, its a nice story it needs more paragraphs were they talk, remember ecah new quote from a person is a new paragrahp.
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Postby Taelia » Wed Nov 23, 2005 9:14 pm

Thanks. ;)
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Postby MY85 » Wed Nov 23, 2005 10:40 pm

odd22 wrote:Rodri give her more time, she might be new at this.


I wasn't being mean to her... maybe it sounded rude, but it's part of the rules.
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Postby Lyoko SA80 » Thu Nov 24, 2005 3:41 am

Cool story sissi and jim in lyoko I thoght i never read that day .make's a good twist to a great story If you need a idea i have a few in mind . Email me a pm if you need any.I likey the sin skin if i right, how do you get it .
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Postby Taelia » Thu Nov 24, 2005 9:52 am

I'll need some help with chapter 5.
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Two of four new characters appearing in much later chapters

Postby Taelia » Fri Nov 25, 2005 8:40 pm

Name: Michiko Stern
Age: 7
Occupation: Lyokon Warrior-in-Training
Family: Ulrich (father), Yumi (mother)
Hair color: Black-brown
Friends: Team Lyoko of the past, Taelia, Lucia, and Audrey
Likes: Saving Lyoko, anime, martial arts, and everything else
Dislikes: None (except X.A.N.A.)

Michiko is the daughter of Ulrich Stern and Yumi Ishiyama in the future. She has the same fighting spirit an inbred courage her father had displayed when he was younger. She is one of Princess Taelia's good friends, and she cares about her more than anything else when she is hurt in Lyoko.

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Name: Taelia Belpois
Age: 7
Occupation: Lyoko Warrior-in-Training, guardian of Lyoko, princess
Family: Jeremie (father), Aelita (mother)
Hair color: Pink with thin blonde streaks (sometimes mistaken for blonde highlights)
Friends: Team Lyoko of the past, Michiko, Lucia, and Audrey
Likes: Saving Lyoko, being a princess, and video games
Dislikes: X.A.N.A.

This little princess is the daughter of Queen Aelita and King Jeremie. Not only is she royalty but she is from Lyoko in the future. She has traveled through time when her world was attacked by X.A.N.A.'s future form so that she might find a way to save her parents and close friends. On this trip she discovered that Aelita and Jeremie were her future parents. After this ordeal and X.A.N.A. was defeated the princess returned to the future to her parents. She stays with Jeremie and his family while she is in the past.
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Postby Lyoko SA80 » Sat Nov 26, 2005 5:40 am

You got some good characters they can't wait for the next story ans chapter
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Postby Taelia » Sat Nov 26, 2005 11:18 am

I can explain the king and queen thing. I'm also a Sailor Moon fan.
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Postby YDV » Sat Nov 26, 2005 2:30 pm

Ayyy!! Michiko? but.. but... that's MY character! -____-; But.. my Michiko has green hair and is the 15 yr old daughter of two martial artists in the year 300x. So it's ok. :D
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Postby Taelia » Sat Nov 26, 2005 2:47 pm

I named her after one of Barbara's (voice of Ulrich) many Japanese gal pals.
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Postby Overcaffeinated Sloth » Sat Nov 26, 2005 8:21 pm

Your De-Virtualization wrote:Ayyy!! Michiko? but.. but... that's MY character! -____-;

Live with it. People take my names too.
Except one time I found a boy Angel, and it was kind of confuzing...
And there was somehow anohter Shelby Minestrone, and another Cheyenne...
Byt no Ankoraks.
I mean come on, who would want to name theire pet "ski Jacket" In french?
And Ajiak's just a twin playoff for consistency.
And for some derranged reason, I can't view it.
Stoopid faulty browser...

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Postby Taelia » Sun Nov 27, 2005 10:14 pm

Mirabelle, Barbara, Matt, Jodi, whaddya think? :) This fic is about your characters' future lives.
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Postby Taelia » Mon Nov 28, 2005 8:36 am

Whaddya think of my story so far?
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Postby Odd22 » Mon Nov 28, 2005 8:59 pm

I am not being rude, but you arent allowed to double post you just use the edit button, i was just warning you.
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The Story of the Future

Postby Taelia » Mon Nov 28, 2005 10:03 pm

Ulrich and Yumi Stern live peacefully and almost eternally in a place called Lyoko. Lyoko is a virtual world that was created by the scientist known as Franz Hopper. The residents of Lyoko live for hundreds upon thousands of years, their lives being extended by a very mysterious power. Ulrich and Yumi, as do their close friends, have a daughter in this time period. She is called Michiko, and as her name suggests she is a very beautiful and wise girl. In an attempt to awaken her powers to prove to herself that she truly is her parents' child, her friend Taelia (the princess of Lyoko and the daughter of its rulers, King Jeremie and Queen Aelita) goes into a room and grabs a crystal. At that very moment, XANA, having a very strong vendetta against Jeremie, attacks Lyoko, and its Queen, as revenge for foiling his many plans against the Earth. Aelita's beautiful body is protected by crystal in a special room in the palace. Her guardians (Yumi, Ulrich, Odd, Sissi, and Jim) and her dear husband Jeremie are all in a deep sleep on beds in another room.

King Jeremie was able to use his still functioning mind, and what little power he had left, to project an image of himself to try to save his kingdom, and his beloved wife and daughter. Taelia and her friends, hearing stories of the legendary warriors known as Team Lyoko (not knowing one of them was her mother, Aelita) got her Time Key and went to the past to find Team Lyoko to save her parents and her kingdom.

Team Lyoko of the past and future end up defeating XANA together with the power of a super team. Taelia awakens her sleeping mother in the future. Aelita goes to awaken her sweet husband, and her dear friends. Jeremie awakens first, and is relieved to see his wife alive and well. The Lyoko Team of the future also awakens, and Aelita uses her powers to restore Lyoko to its beauty, while waiting for her daughter and her friends to come back from the past.
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Re: The Story of the Future

Postby kiwi » Thu Dec 01, 2005 7:04 pm

Taelia wrote:Ulrich and Yumi Stern live peacefully and almost eternally in a place called Lyoko..
Team Lyoko of the past and future end up defeating XANA together with the power of a super team. Taelia awakens her sleeping mother in the future. Aelita goes to awaken her sweet husband, and her dear friends. Jeremie awakens first, and is relieved to see his wife alive and well. The Lyoko Team of the future also awakens, and Aelita uses her powers to restore Lyoko to its beauty, while waiting for her daughter and her friends to come back from the past.

this is cool. Is there more? I had a hard time using the link set up at the top of this page.. what is that site?
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Postby Taelia » Thu Dec 01, 2005 7:05 pm

It's a message board made by Blueyedblonde. ;)

Here's the whole thing.

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Ulrich and Yumi Stern live peacefully and almost eternally in a place called Lyoko. Lyoko is a virtual world that was created by the scientist known as Franz Hopper. The residents of Lyoko live for hundreds upon thousands of years, their lives being extended by a very mysterious power. Ulrich and Yumi, as do their close friends, have a daughter in this time period. She is called Michiko, and as her name suggests she is a very beautiful and wise girl. In an attempt to awaken her powers to prove to herself that she truly is her parents' child, her friend Taelia (the princess of Lyoko and the daughter of its rulers, King Jeremie and Queen Aelita) goes into a room and grabs a crystal. At that very moment, XANA, having a very strong vendetta against Jeremie, attacks Lyoko, and its Queen, as revenge for foiling his many plans against the Earth. Aelita's beautiful body is protected by crystal in a special room in the palace. Her guardians (Yumi, Ulrich, Odd, Sissi, and Jim) and her dear husband Jeremie are all in a deep sleep on beds in another room.

King Jeremie was able to use his still functioning mind, and what little power he had left, to project an image of himself to try to save his kingdom, and his beloved wife and daughter. Taelia and her friends, hearing stories of the legendary warriors known as Team Lyoko (not knowing one of them was her mother, Aelita) got her Time Key and went to the past to find Team Lyoko to save her parents and her kingdom.

Team Lyoko of the past and future end up defeating XANA together with the power of a super team. Taelia awakens her sleeping mother in the future. Aelita goes to awaken her sweet husband, and her dear friends. Jeremie awakens first, and is relieved to see his wife alive and well. The Lyoko Team of the future also awakens, and Aelita uses her powers to restore Lyoko to its beauty, while waiting for her daughter and her friends to come back from the past.
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Postby Taelia » Sat Dec 03, 2005 6:13 pm

History: Dreamina was a female XANA Droid who was summoned by XANA to deal with Aelita after the latter appeared in order to stop him from killing Taelia. In accordance with his orders, Dreamina succeeded in causing her opponent to fall into a deep sleep and then tried to do the same to the other Team Lyoko members when they arrived, though she was thwarted in her attempt to do so after Ulrich neutralized her attack by countering it with his katana blocking her sound waves, causing her to revert into a dark cloud. After explaining to the Team that Aelita was trapped in a dream which was slowly causing her to expire by expending all her life energy, the now mistlike XANA Droid entered her would-be victim's body, her presence preventing all efforts to rouse her from her slumber, though Jeremie finally succeeded in doing so by kissing Aelita, thereby restoring the energy she had lost with the power of his undying love for his "princess". Enraged at being interrupted, Dreamina attacked the two of them, managing to wound Jeremie in the shoulder, but ended up being negated of her evil influence by an equally enraged Aelita's "Lyoko Healing Activation".

Eyes: Gold
Hair: Deep pink
Skin: Normal

Abilities: Aside from the power of flight and the ability to appear out of nowhere when summoned by XANA, Dreamina could emit a continuous concentric wave of greenish blue energy from her mouth that would cause whoever was bathed in it to fall into a deep, magically induced sleep, like a lullaby. Once in this dormant state, the victim would become trapped in a dream in which he or she would gradually expend all of his or her life energy, resulting in a slow decrease in body temperature and eventually death if the individual was not awakened in time. In addition, Dreamina could assume the form of a dark swirling cloud of mist, and, in this state, was able to enter the body of an individual who had already been put to sleep through the aforementioned means in order to prevent - or at least render more difficult - any attempts to rouse them from their slumber. The Droid's presence within a person's physical form manifested itself as an aura of pink energy around that individual.
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Postby Xanadu » Tue Jan 24, 2006 5:38 pm

I'm a HUGE Sailor Moon fan, so I'm loving this story, CL and SM together!! And "Lyoko Healing Activation" lol. I love it Taelia! :D
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