After three months of quiet once he escaped from the supercomputer, XANA strikes again, but this time he has a new method of attack. And he's going global. As the battle grows more urgent, the team grows as well... but what will happen when Winter falls?
Yes... I got the idea for this one day when I had one of those "wouldn't it be cool if....?" moments. Read and comment/review, please! Oh, and wouldya tell me if it's a little.. cliche? Because that's been bothering me.
HOLY CRAP WOMAN. Where did you learn to write? Honestly xD; We could be a manga team. Deedee could come up with the concept, you write the storyboard and I could draw. See! Foolproof plan.
we will advance with sword in hand for our cause is pure
OMGYES!! Muahaha! We could do that and then I wouldn't have to <s>use all of Deedee's money</s> beg on the streets! xD;
Honestly I have no idea where I learned to write. I suppose in school. But for some reason I just go "lalala! 8D" into a keyboard and I get 100's on essays. o____o
Yay! Manga team! That be fun... Anyways....I really like your story. Well written Yea...I'm about to leave a comment on it. I'm Haikarion Niwakan
Habataku mono wo mukaeru sora/Shihaisareru no wo osoreyashinai/Akogareru mabayusa wa/Subete wo kaeru tame ni/Dare mo yurusazu ni/Doko he yukeru darou?
The sky greets those who fly,I don't fear of being controlled/The dazzling brightness that I aspire for is to change everything/I cannot forgive anyone, where can I go?
-Doubt & Trust, access
Note: Avatar is from Mahou Sentai Magiranger. Watch it. It is made of win.
wow great story, great plot, great writing, great
well it seems as if everyone wants sissi to be part of the group, so who am I to argue, but anyways, I look forward to how you depicst XANA attacking
A lot of member have sigs that say"I'm a boy", or "I'm a girl", I refuse to join this trend.
"Never let your morals get in the way of doing what's right" --Isaac Asimov
98% OF TEENS WON'T STAND UP FOR GOD..
only 2% to go
Wow. Just wow. If only this could be Season 3 instead of whatever Moonscoop's doing. I think this will probably end up being alot better. Too bad it'll never happen.
Anyway; I thought it was written just as well as, if not better, than the last chapter (but maybe it just seems that way to me because I just loved the atmosphere of the whole thing. I honestly don't think I could be patient for very long if all the other chapters are like that.).