Reviews For Aelita's Choise
Reviewer: Jeremified Signed 
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Date: Jul 02, 2007 04:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2007 04:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like the different perspectives; I also think this deserves much more than one star.
Reviewer: 2remember Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2007 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
[Report This]Date: Apr 14, 2007 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
It seems short. It doesn't read like it's finished yet.
What happens on the date? Is this a brief fling, or is Aelita really smitten by this guy? Either way, what happens next?
Add a little more to the story, let us know where it leads the characters to, for better or worse.