[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2008 06:46 PM Title: Chapter 8
Not a bad story, not at all. I figured Flora would make her stay at Kadic, but the story was enjoyable to read and had some fun moments.
Author's Response:
Let's hope it stays fun!
Date: Mar 30, 2008 06:24 PM Title: The Sceence Behnd the Ficten
The necklaces are... interesting. Everything else sounds good.
Author's Response: Thanks! They were gong to be brclts, but that's too simler to Ben 10. Not to mentn, very crul to Od & Ulrick...
Date: Mar 20, 2008 07:18 PM Title: Chapter 3
It's a very interesting piece so far. I find that you're creative. Five stars. =)
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you stick arond for the next story!
[Report This]Date: Mar 18, 2008 02:04 AM Title: The Sceence Behnd the Ficten
100 reviews? really, or are exageratin?
i loved this story
Author's Response:
Uh,no...over 100 vews. As in the # of times that peple have clckd on my story. I'm glad that I've had 2 fathfl revewrs thogh!
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2008 08:12 PM Title: The Sceence Behnd the Ficten
Are you going to make a sequal?
Author's Response: Yep! See The Scence Behnd the Ficten for more info!
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2008 04:48 AM Title: Chapter 8
yeah!!!!! flora joinning the lyoko warriors!!!! awesomenesssssssss, too many ssss hu? oh well you updated, finally, its a good ending, a bit of a cliffie though, is there a sequel? or is this not over yet, is all-american girl flora's fav song or something/
well theres my questions!!
c ya
Author's Response: Hmm...you shall see...you shall see...
[Report This]Date: Mar 04, 2008 05:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
Yumi said "Flora-san"! I'm not sounding to weird saying most writers don't make Yumi sound a little more Japanese. I salute you for giving her more of a Japanese outlook.
OH, and please update! I love this story!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Since Flora & Yumi don't know each othr well, I figrd that Yumi wold use -san to addrss her. Note that she dosn't say Alita-san, as she is alrdy very close to Alita.
[Report This]Date: Feb 24, 2008 03:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
ohh dont worry, ill remember that song, i have it on my mp3!!!!!!!!!!!! the songs got a ood story to it too!
Author's Response: I know, I love it! Just keep it in mind...
[Report This]Date: Feb 24, 2008 03:39 AM Title: Chapter 6
woot woot!
she updated(ur a she right? cause only a girl can write this good lol)
awesome, cant wait, why does flora have a heart pendant! and where did the pendants come from anyways?????????
ohh well i gotta wait then!
Author's Response:
The pendnts? From Alita's pockt of corse! lol, you'll see what they're for soon...
Oh, & I'm a girl. Hence virtugirl.
Date: Feb 23, 2008 01:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
Good story so far.
Author's Response: Thanks! The next chaptr shold be filld with acten...
[Report This]Date: Feb 17, 2008 03:04 AM Title: Chapter 5
ohhh, and i love that song, and, i love this story,
thnx for finally updating, i might shout this story, to get you more readers!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm glad to see that sombdy likes my work engh to prmte it!
A tiny hint: Rember the song...
[Report This]Date: Feb 13, 2008 04:17 AM Title: Chapter 4
wow, yes yumi-san came , tnx for updates 10/10 ;)
Author's Response: No prob! I'm glad that I have a fathfl revewr who is still stndng by me!
[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2008 09:03 PM Title: Chapter 3
that was a good chpt but it took you AGES to update, i like the idea the idea of aelita going to tokyo she should have bought along yumi!
ps. flora looks nice
Author's Response:
It's like you have red my mind...perhps Yumi will show up...soonr or later...
Thanks, just rember that I didn't make her!
[Report This]Date: Jan 26, 2008 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 2
its awesome, please update, you dont have to beg for a feview, its good enough itself to get heaps of praise, keep writing, awesome start
Author's Response: Relly?! No body has ever said that to me befre! Thank you!!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 26, 2008 02:43 PM Title: Chapter 2
Please update! I must know what Aelita's planning to do.
Author's Response: Well, I kinda told ya in the summry, but at lest I'm keepng you in suspnse!