Reviews For The Return of Xana
Reviewer: 5CarthageRocks Signed 
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Date: Jul 31, 2008 03:05 AM Title: Pain and Victory
[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2008 03:05 AM Title: Pain and Victory
Hmm...
Well as you said, it is rather short. But the plot comes across rather nicely; all you have to work on is adding detail. Good job. :)
(Having trouble remembering if I've read this before...x_x)