Date: Jul 31, 2008 02:34 PM Title: When do you know you belong?
Andrew...I bet. I got kind of lost. You didn't explain very well. But other than that...I guess it was okay. You're trying a little too hard to put the languages you know in the story. Don't worry about it.
Date: Jul 31, 2008 02:32 PM Title: When do you know you belong?
Actually, you probably want to put "Je m'appelle Yumi" or "Je m'appelle Andrew" for the "je suis" part. You don't want to literally say "I am (je suis)"...French people don't speak like that.
Otherwise, somewhat short, but good :D
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2008 05:57 AM Title: Love'll divide us
awww, nice ending, nice series, 10/10 again
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2008 05:26 AM Title: When do you know you belong?
i like it, kaz sounds funny!!!
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2008 05:22 AM Title: A Chosen One on Earth
nice story, but a few mysteries, how did a super computer and scanners got built in north america, in an abandoned factory?
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2008 05:08 AM Title: Why Me???
wow, weird ending, what happened exactly, was hiroki xanafied, correct me if im wrong, and whatabout the sewers in yumi's backyard?
[Report This]Date: Nov 25, 2006 12:01 AM Title: Why Me???
Awesome! This series HAS to be amazing!