Date: Feb 01, 2008 06:39 AM Title: First it's here, Then it isn't.
great, it surprised me, ALOT thnx
Date: Apr 08, 2007 06:10 PM Title: First it's here, Then it isn't.
That one was nice.(I really hope it NEVER happens though) Hey, If you get around to updatind "How Much is Too Much?" be sure to tell me. I can't wait!
Date: Apr 06, 2007 07:26 PM Title: First it's here, Then it isn't.
Short but sweet! S/J forever! Extremely cute. (Thanks for responding to my challenge, btw.) ^_^ I think I might look forward to more S/J from you? Good writing style! 8/10!!
Date: Mar 27, 2007 07:28 PM Title: First it's here, Then it isn't.
Intersting. Good, but I'd reccomend something a little longer though. Didn't take that long to read.
Date: Mar 11, 2007 07:09 PM Title: First it's here, Then it isn't.
Wow. That's really good! Short, sweet, and well-written. The only major problem I had was the occasional grammar mistakes like in this sentence:
"Well, Thanks, and uh, Bye Elizabeth."
"thanks" and "bye" shouldn't be capitalized. And "bye" should have a comma after it.
All in all, I did like it. :)
Date: Mar 10, 2007 07:50 PM Title: First it's here, Then it isn't.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! You stole my idea! Now "Apathy and Emergency" will looked like a used idea! DX Ah well, too short in my opinion. Original *grumble* I'll give you a seven.
Oh my gawsh!
I ish sorry...
I'm thinking about adding stuff here and there, but I wanted to finish the main idea before i had 2 leave the house...so yeah.
My bad! <3