Date: Jan 13, 2008 03:15 AM Title: Chapter 8
wen u gonna update next??? its really good so far!
Date: Sep 27, 2007 09:16 AM Title: Chapter 8
OMG I LUV THE DANCE.... THE SLAPPING WAS SO FUNNI :D
I WANT MORE.... I WANT MORE who r u?? can we hav more.....this is SO good.. its better than anything.... not too much "sexual acts" and quite funny too... i don't like the idea of odd and sissi.. thats just wrong because wan't she the villian?? ...but i don't mind now... all i wan't is for you to continue the story... :( pweeez?
[Report This]Date: Mar 17, 2007 08:27 PM Title: Chapter 8
OK thats it! i have been waiting and waiting... and you never finish the stupid story!!! Its been over a year and you cant even write 1 more chapter? Infact i got so board waiting that i continued the story in my head, and its good! Im just dissapointed and impatiant. Its to good of a story to just not finish.
[Report This]Date: Feb 14, 2007 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 8
Still spechless... BUT YOU MUST CONTINUE!!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2007 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 8
....wow....im spechles...
[Report This]Date: Sep 04, 2006 04:21 PM Title: Chapter 8
The story so far is pretty good! Maybe just a little too lovey dovey! It's not completly realistic either! The characters need to be a bit more "in-character", but you've got Jeremie and Aelita down well! I give it a 7.5!