Reviews For A thin line
Reviewer: trixter 93 Signed 
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Date: Feb 15, 2008 02:43 AM Title: A rope in one hand, a string in the other
[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2008 02:43 AM Title: A rope in one hand, a string in the other
AH are you going to complete, its such a captivating intro, are you going t finish
Reviewer: Gravity Control Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2007 07:24 AM Title: A rope in one hand, a string in the other
[Report This]Date: May 09, 2007 07:24 AM Title: A rope in one hand, a string in the other
Short chap but very cool! Really opens it up. Can't wait for updates but I will if necessary! 8/10 so far.
Reviewer: xana2 Signed 
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Date: Oct 13, 2006 08:34 PM Title: A rope in one hand, a string in the other
[Report This]Date: Oct 13, 2006 08:34 PM Title: A rope in one hand, a string in the other
so how is evil?
Reviewer: Stonecreek Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2006 10:13 AM Title: A rope in one hand, a string in the other
[Report This]Date: Sep 07, 2006 10:13 AM Title: A rope in one hand, a string in the other
You need to get off the generalizations. The first three paragraphs are nothing but overused phrases. Then you pianstakingly introduce each of the characters. knowing the readership of this site, that probably isn't necessary, as they're already familiar with the show. I understand that this is an intro, but still, give it some interesting legs to stand on.
Reviewer: RockyB Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2006 08:43 PM Title: A rope in one hand, a string in the other
[Report This]Date: Sep 03, 2006 08:43 PM Title: A rope in one hand, a string in the other
Don't know what to make of it , not much has happened! Though, it seems to be going in the right direction!
Reviewer: QuinSeparable Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2006 06:09 PM Title: A rope in one hand, a string in the other
[Report This]Date: Sep 02, 2006 06:09 PM Title: A rope in one hand, a string in the other
hmm...I'm interested and curious...