Date: Dec 05, 2007 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
That's histerical! You should write another fic like this cuz this is extremely awesome! And you're right, slash pairings are weird and I personally think that fics should be like the show, only a little different to make it a little more interesting. Adding new characters is good, but something crazy, like Odd liking Ulrich, is totally insane. You said everything in this fic that I've been wanting to say and you even made it funny!
Date: Nov 06, 2007 06:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good concept but I believe it could have been handled a bit better.
First of all please next time you write, try to break the story up into paragraphs or something instead of having a wall o' text. It'll make it a bit easier to read.
Next...Jeremie or Jeremy. NOT Jearmy.
And, as you are trying to make authors see how OOC some stories are (and I agree some of them really are!) you tend to make some of the characters OOC as well
Date: Oct 29, 2007 04:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
I don't blame them for hating slush and femslush pairing, I hate them just as much.
thanks for the review, i basicly had an hour to kill and had writers block on my first Code Lyoko story, so i came up with this rant disgised as a story, the ending was inspired by an old comic from england (the beano) i read, and basicly involves the Lyoko warriors (and kiwi) attacking me, despite what they said my next story that's really my first i just havent finished it yet, i won't include half the things that pissed them off, (i do include two OC's but their both male and only one joins the Lyoko warriors, the other i just came up with a real funny moment and does soughta represent me, cos i'm insane like he is) yeah slash pairings creep me out, call me old fasioned but i think the guys should like the girls, (don't really mind girls liking the girls but guys liking guys is sick and wrong) even so Sissi and Yumi or Alita or even Yumi and Alita is really twisted.
thanks again, this was my first lyoko fic, i have a fanfiction account under the name Jemex and have done some yugioh fan fics and Stargate fan fics before so i'm better than i was a year ago.
Date: Oct 29, 2007 01:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
what i dont get it
Author's Response: basicly it's me ranting about errors and pairings and fan fic themes and ideals that i hate like for example some fics portray kadic and the show as been based in america when since it's a french program it is based in france, it was basicly created to kill an hour i had to spare so don't worry about it