[Report This]Date: Feb 03, 2008 03:51 AM Title: Chapter 1: XANA's only the Half of it
its awesome, a great story,i love the ending
[Report This]Date: Jan 28, 2008 04:55 AM Title: Chapter 9: Gang War
yeah, i love 9, and your right aniki does mean big bro, awesome,
[Report This]Date: Jan 28, 2008 04:23 AM Title: Chapter 2: A New Foe
no, chapter 2 was a goood chapter, but m not finish reading, so i dont noe if its the best
[Report This]Date: Dec 12, 2007 02:08 PM Title: Chapter 5: A choice between Trust and Betrayal Part 2
You gave Jeremie a bit of an attitude, didn't you? But even so, it's still a good story.
Author's Response: Jeremie just seems like a strict and stubborn character to me, I don't get it, but he always seems to have a bit of a strict attitude. I makes the story interesting. :P
Date: Nov 13, 2007 03:38 AM Title: Chapter 1: XANA's only the Half of it
i hope you start working on yumi and Ulrichs relationship next chapter (or the lack of one) i'm not saying they should always be an item, but the tension is clearly their in the first chapter, it's a nice idea for the story though
Author's Response: Don't worry the tension will start to clear as the story goes on, It really clears up in the next chapter I'm writting.