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Reviewer: GarageKid Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2008 05:58 PM Title: Chapter 7

Yumi said "Flora-san"! I'm not sounding to weird saying most writers don't make Yumi sound a little more Japanese. I salute you for giving her more of a Japanese outlook.

OH, and please update! I love this story! 



Author's Response:

Thanks! Since Flora & Yumi don't know each othr well, I figrd that Yumi wold use -san to addrss her. Note that she dosn't say Alita-san, as she is alrdy very close to Alita.

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