Really sorry SOL...other things have been kinda preventing me from finding enough time online to get to LFF to read your fanfic. -_-

 Anyway, I don't really want to spam the fanfic with individual reviews for each chapter, since I kinda got behind on reading a lot, but so far it's great. I don't know where you plan to go with the plot, but your writing is very artful, and it helps contribute to the overall plot.

 One thing I might add though is that a few times in the story, it's difficult to tell if it's a flashback or the present. But it could have been because I was distracted...ehehe. >.>

 Overall, great so far. I look forward to reading more. :)