[Report This]Date: May 22, 2008 05:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
yay!!!
and ya i do wnt a 3rd fic/story about flora, maybe you know just showing her as part of thegroup in kadic, fightning xana, you know "normal" stff
Author's Response: Ok! It'll be K+ agen, too, so don't worry!
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2008 06:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well, if you want to be real picky, 'soul of legonds', Ulrick is spelled Ulrich, Ailta is spelled Aelita. Then there was mixing up 'fond' and 'found' and 'cold' and 'could'. However! I don't think someone should review solely on spelling... (And for the record, the spelling in your stories is improving.)
So far it's not bad. Your writing really has a nice flare or taste or something. It's 'fun' to read and not just some pointless self-insertion that only the author finds interesting. It's a little short for my taste, but what's there deserves 5/5 stars.
Author's Response: As some body who can't spell to save her own life, I complty agree with you! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story! Do you mind e-malng my techers & tellng them what you said abot spellng...
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2008 02:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
yay, a sequel, love it
hahaha, leather, i didnt know that the skid has laether!? cool,
Author's Response: I didn't know ether, I just wantd to try & make a joke... It wold be relly nice if it did thogh...
Date: Mar 29, 2008 02:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
OOOOOKKKAY? Odd is spelled Odd not Od, but not to bad
Author's Response: Thanks! The next chaptrs actlly have to do with the plot, so stay tund!