Stop being so critical on her spelling. It's obvious this chapter she either checked it herself and added in all the vowels or ran it through spell check. Not all the words are the words they're supposed to be, but there's no spelling mistakes.

Of COURSE Od is Odd. Hey, she gets Xana right. She spells Ulrich in a way that name can be spelled and Aelita is just one complicated vowel seizure with an 'l' and 't' thrown in.

 I could critique your comment on spelling: "person", "purpose", "explanation", "warriors". (A worrier is someone who worries.)

But, I'm getting all hyped up over Soul's 'review' which is even in the wrong chapter. 

Aging the Lyoko warriors! I don't think I've heard of that before. I was wondering how you were going to have kids investigate something going on in Sin City. Interesting development. And maybe some foreshadowing? I can imagine Yumi and Ulrich sneaking off during some free time...

Short, but inspired as usual. : ) 

I'll give you a 10, because you basically spelled their names right (or were just lucky and didn't have to spell the harder ones).