Reviews For A Parallel Demane
Reviewer: Sithking Zero Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2008 09:09 PM Title: Chapter 1 The Fight
Date: Aug 10, 2008 09:09 PM Title: Chapter 1 The Fight
I rather like the story's idea, and the plot, but the grammer I find atrocious. It'd be great otherwise...
Author's Response: Oui, oui. Yah, I know about the grammer. Cut me some slack, hu? This was one of the first ones in english.