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Reviewer: soul of legonds Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 05, 2008 01:06 PM Title: Chapter 5

oh, no explosion.

Author's Response: Nope, sorry. But thre might be a tiny 1 (not litrly) at the end...

Reviewer: soul of legonds Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2008 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 4

ummmm, well it's not bad. OH, I Have An IDEA, Geo-Magnetic distubencec amplified by diposits of nikel and silicon in the beach being bombarded by charged energy particals creating a feed back loop that will cause the enitre cosline to detinated in a mass explosion. The eggs are just being effected by the geo-magnetic engergy which is weaking the eggs and embryos

Author's Response: Ok...what? I won't tell you whthr you're right or wrong, but I can tell you that I have absolty no idea what you just said. Good guss thogh!

Reviewer: trixter 93 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 20, 2008 02:48 AM Title: Chapter 2

yes, another trip, awesome, first japan, then las vages,..... now florida baybe!!!!!



Author's Response: Yep! All plces I'd love to go to some day...

Reviewer: trixter 93 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2008 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

yeah, floras back, and so are you, i wonder how this one will turn out as good as the others!?

Author's Response: I'll try to do my best to make it even bettr!

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