Good use of codes (I myself happen to know that code :P), keep trying to pull out the detail. :) If I could make a suggestion, try to equally depict the scenes on Lyoko and Earth (as in on the Replika and Translated on Earth) with equal detail, so that one scene is the focus and the other is just a shadow. I mean, just try to make sure that both scenes have enough detail in them to not leave too many questions for the reader. ^^;

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to keep that in mind! :D