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Reviewer: trixter 93 Signed 
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Date: Jan 30, 2008 03:00 AM Title: Will He?
[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2008 03:00 AM Title: Will He?
ahhhhh, no aelita, dont believe kim, jer bear looooves you
Reviewer: metrunui1 Signed 
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Date: Oct 03, 2006 07:42 AM Title: Will He?
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2006 07:42 AM Title: Will He?
good job so far, i personaly think that you have Aelita a little too outgoing. But that is probibly just me, good job!
Author's Response: Thanks, and please excuse it, because I don't really know how to play Aelita really well...
Reviewer: 2remember Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 02, 2006 04:13 PM Title: Will He?
Author's Response: Super great!!! I'll check or it in the future!! Thanks for da help!
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2006 04:13 PM Title: Will He?
I'm liking it so far...
The only thing I'd watch out for is using another word that sounds the same as the word you're really thinking of, like "your" instead of "you're" when you mean "you are." It's a mistake I've seen in a lot of fanfics; and it's something a spell checker will not necessarily catch.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Super great!!! I'll check or it in the future!! Thanks for da help!
Reviewer: Puppy_Kiwi_Luv Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 02, 2006 03:13 PM Title: Will He?
Author's Response: Thank you, Thank you!
Your Best Friend,
Mandiee XP
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2006 03:13 PM Title: Will He?
You have a ew spelling misstakes. But otherwise it rox.
Your Best Friend, Bry
Author's Response: Thank you, Thank you!
Your Best Friend,
Mandiee XP