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Reviewer: trixter 93 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2008 03:07 AM Title: Chapter 8 - The Mistake

thats, cool, so aelita and katie are friends,nice

Reviewer: trixter 93 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2008 02:56 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Love is Cruel

wow, katies,deep, and what a weird goup, william-yumi-ulrich-sissi-odd-aelita-jeremy-katie

great idea 

Reviewer: aelita2468 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2007 11:57 PM Title: First Book Overview

You are an AWESOME writer. You're very poetic in some parts of the story too. This story is very impressive. You should write a book. Or, you should contact the writers of Code Lyoko and get them to make your stories into episodes or something. :-)    10 of 10

Reviewer: Gravity Control Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2007 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 8 - The Mistake

Hmm, intriguing series! When I first saw this I thought to myself, "Great, I just know where this is going; Kaitie's another Mary-Sue." Turns out I was wrong! I voted 9 out of 10!!

P.S. So...just out of curiosity...who does Jeremie end up with? Aelita or Kaitie? *secretly hopes it's Yumi* *is a devoted, die-hard J/Y fan for life*

Author's Response: XD idk maybe he will end up with someone completely different or maybe not. i didnt put that on purpose just so u know. that was a n accident I DIDNT MEAN IT :)

Reviewer: Wolf Tears Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2007 01:58 PM Title: First Book Overview

Wee :) I like it, you must update!

 In responce to Izzeban-YES! Update Invert NOW! *laughs*

No, really. Update it, please-I'm dying here!

Off Izzeban resonce :) In responce to your responce to someone else (???), I have really weird dreams too-really weird. For me, weird is normal even in reality.

Like the dream in which I got sucked through my TV, which was apparently a dimensional loophole twister, and right into Kadic. Heh-It was fun, actually. Dreams are the only places you can go out with fictional characters you like... *hugs Odd*

Oh, yes... In my story, I based parts of Cilena off myself-her eyes, her personality, her love of archery, her personality... Not the parents thing. (you have to read it...)

Sorry for length, hehe XD

Author's Response: no prob with the length. I'm rather talkative myself, so don't hit your own head on the wall. Hit mine instead.

Reviewer: Izzeban Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 25, 2006 06:57 PM Title: Chapter 4 - What If


Suspense rules. I can't wait to see the after-effects of this.

Although I shouldn't be talking myself,  since I haven't updated Bridge's sequel from the critical point I left it at

So yeah, keep up the good work. 

Author's Response:

lol. thanks, I had hoped someone would say that.I have the wildest ideas.

(You're lucky you're not in my head when I'm dreaming ^ ^) 

Reviewer: Izzeban Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 11, 2006 07:37 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Resisting Secrets

I like the whole series so far, and the direction it's heading in. Love triangles own. It reminded me that I needed to add a new story to my series now that Bridge is done...roffle.

Author's Response:

thanks. I actually based kaitie on myself (can you belive it? *laughs aloud*). Just one of my secrets, making some of my stories with a person alike me. I wont give any spoilers, but I'm making a new story called zanna, another romance story. I really work on things like that.

Oh, and THANK YOU for letting me know bridge is done, I love your story!! you went straight to my favorite authors list after I read the first few chapters. Bridge is my favorite story.  :)


Reviewer: lyoko101 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 29, 2006 07:08 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Virtualization

uh... I thought Katie was replacing aelita.. guess i misunderstood.

Author's Response:

that's okay. this is a sequel to the new girl, so you have to read it first to uderstand this at all. no, kaitie's not replacing aelita... yet. *laughs evily*

anyway, I'm working on a way to do this in an understandable way. this might be a spoiler for the story later on, but it will have to do with ulrich, odd, and jeremie getiing jealous...

*laughs evily again* 

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