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Reviewer: Exalon Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2007 03:30 AM Title: All or Nothing

you have to find a way to keep Yumi at Kadic, she's needed on Lyoko and she and Ulrich can't be split up.

Reviewer: Hyreia Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2007 09:18 AM Title: All or Nothing

Awesome story!  Some of the earlier chapters were a bit short, but that's just me being nitpicky.

Excellent plot, excellent writing! I'm definitely checking up on this story more. 

Reviewer: GarageKid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2007 08:53 AM Title: All or Nothing

I LOVE this story. PLEASE update!!

Reviewer: oddlyoko1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2007 10:58 PM Title: All or Nothing

Well, I personaly like this kind of story ayways but you amung few have left me speachless. That means keep it up.

Reviewer: Izzeban Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2006 06:31 PM Title: All or Nothing

I definitely like the direction this is going. It's well written with lots of yummy details (eveybody likes those!) and it can definitely go on to be one of the better stories here on LFF.

The only thing I would go for is a spell check at the end of each chapter. I found a few misspelled words, but I'm not going to be a grammar nazi right now ;)

Another thing I would consider dropping is the parental warning, since what it claims has not happened yet in the story and might be deemed spoilers for your own story. I'd add it in when the chapters it refers to are up. 

Another thing about the warning is the fact that some people might see at as a gimmick (since the top-favorited story on LFF has the same exact warning, some would say that you only put that in to steal the thunder generated by it)  although I don't see it that way.

Keep up the good work. I've got my own story to update.

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