Reviews For Totallyoko!
Reviewer: trixter 93 Signed 
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Date: Feb 01, 2008 07:04 PM Title: Factory Inferno
[Report This]Date: Feb 01, 2008 07:04 PM Title: Factory Inferno
ahhhh, finish i have to know what happened
Reviewer: aelita2468 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2007 12:44 AM Title: Factory Inferno
[Report This]Date: Dec 24, 2007 12:44 AM Title: Factory Inferno
It's a really good idea but you didn't even finish it! It says it's complete but you barely got to the plot! Add more chapters, or a sequel or something. Good luck!
Reviewer: Kiwi_R0x Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 23, 2006 03:38 PM Title: Factory Inferno
[Report This]Date: Nov 23, 2006 03:38 PM Title: Factory Inferno
Awesome! Like it! make sum more stories! Your a pretty good author! Better author then me anyday!
Reviewer: Rudger Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 23, 2006 11:00 AM Title: Factory Inferno
[Report This]Date: Nov 23, 2006 11:00 AM Title: Factory Inferno
Nice first chapter. Hoping to see more in the future.
Reviewer: lazyreader19 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2006 06:43 AM Title: Factory Inferno
[Report This]Date: Nov 22, 2006 06:43 AM Title: Factory Inferno
Make More Cahpters soon or a sequal