I love writing and I love Code Lyoko so I figure why not combine the two huh?
Emily centered oneshot."Hello, Yumi," she said, voice shaking slightly. "It's been a while hasn't it? Four years, in fact. You probably wouldn't even remember me now."
I've always liked Emilie ever since Routine and wished she had more time on screen. It's nice to read a fic with her in it and I love the song you chose...fits in pretty well with the story.
Probably the best bordering the YJ pairing I've read. Okay to be honest this is the only one I've read. I love how you kept the cannon pairings yet kind of touched on YJ. Nice job!
hmm...I'm interested and curious...
A one-shot songfic from William's P.O.V. set at season three's conclusion. William is introspective about just why he let XANA take over him.
I like the reasons that you gave for William...nice job and it seems to fit his character.
One thing you might want to do is do some proofreading before uploading. There are quite a bit of typos in the story.
Ah, my favorite part of the entire episode. I like how your fic focused on the XANA end (whereas my fic of the scene focused on William). I also like the XANA-Yumi pairing and there's not enough good fics out there :)
Love your writing style! Great job! As for the text, I think it is necessary...it eases us into the story instead of slamming us in the face. I wish I would have done something more like that with mine.
Not too bad but I think it could be longer. And please, don't take this as a flame but...
Just a suggestion. Watch and make sure you don't jump tenses and be careful about fragments. I would also caution you to not start so many sentances with "and" as well as perhaps brush up on the rules for using commas.
the cast of Code Lyoko are pissed and want the fan fic authors to know why (must read, it is good!)
my first but hopefully not last attempt at a lyoko fan fic
(rated due to swearing)
Good concept but I believe it could have been handled a bit better.
First of all please next time you write, try to break the story up into paragraphs or something instead of having a wall o' text. It'll make it a bit easier to read.
Next...Jeremie or Jeremy. NOT Jearmy.
And, as you are trying to make authors see how OOC some stories are (and I agree some of them really are!) you tend to make some of the characters OOC as well